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fairyminseok November 18 2014, 02:10:57 UTC
I'll have you know I'm now going to church every Sunday after reading this

bless your soul

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torontok November 29 2014, 16:55:47 UTC
Bless, look at that. My pornographic material has brought you closer to god,Take that, mother!
Thank you for reading!

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yeolis November 18 2014, 03:12:43 UTC
Poooor jongin crying with tao's clothes on
This story is so beautiful, really /sniffs/
(LOL AT LUHAN)

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torontok November 29 2014, 16:56:26 UTC
That scene hurt me to write.
Lol I always write Luhan as a loser, idk why,
Thank you for reading

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bluedreaming November 19 2014, 02:36:11 UTC
This is brilliant and wonderful and BREATHPLAY and Tao needs to be wrecked every day. I demand it. And I LOVE dom!Chen we need more of him and of course Jongin is perfectly delightful and fluffy and sexy and a cute little exhibitionist. And Minseok as the best roommate and I'm glad Tao is finally getting bottom action because the time between Minseok leaving and that finally happening with Chen and Jongin was a regretful (but necessary in the story) loss of bottom!Tao deliciousness. Though I will never argue against top!Tao. And the mention of Yifan (and Jongdae!! That was too deliciously cruel!) was perfect.

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torontok November 29 2014, 16:57:19 UTC
OMG, this comment "hugs to chest'
I'm so happy I finally got to write Dom!Chen, he is everything to me
Thank you for reading!

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pseudo_shigure November 19 2014, 06:42:11 UTC
DOM!CHEN IS ALL I CARE I NEED MORE OF THAT. I LOVE THAT HE'S SUPER MEAN TO HIS SUBS/BOYFRIENDS. IT'S LOVELY.

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torontok November 29 2014, 16:57:55 UTC
HE'S NOT MEAN, HE;S JUST UNINTENTIONALLY DUMB BUT HE TRIES TO KISS IT BETTER
Thank you for reading!

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wolfodder November 19 2014, 23:43:28 UTC
*clutches at chest*
so many feelings in one fic wow.

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torontok November 29 2014, 16:58:40 UTC
I have a lot of emotions and pours throw in my writing.I hope your chest is okay!
Thank you for reading.

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