Comments | immortaolize: of being like cats and dogs, for everyone

taomod in immortaolize

of being like cats and dogs, for everyone

Nov 19, 2014 16:13

Title: Of Being Like Cats and Dogs
Recipient: everyone
Paring: Chanyeol/Tao
Rating: r
Summary: A new apartment in Berlin, new roommates, it's a new start for Tao. It could be everything he wanted... if only Chanyeol wouldn't hate him.
Author's notes: To my dearest recipient, I'm sorry if this is different from what you had in mind and I hope ( Read more... )

tao/chanyeol, r, !fic

Comments 6

bauci November 21 2014, 12:37:03 UTC

I enjoyed the setting, you really gave a strong mental image of their setting. I do feel cheated that we didn't get to see the couple-yoga because after they did it in KNTM I've really wanted to see that in a fic :(((( I need Tao holding up Chanyeol and Chanyeol accidentally kneeing Tao in the groin 8DDDD
This fest has been hitting all my Chantao needs, ty for the contribution!! :)

eoryndal December 2 2014, 00:55:33 UTC

Die Jungs left quite an impact on me, as you can imagine :P Berlin is a fantastic city. Awww, man, I'm sorry about the yoga in fact, I had a scene written but I had to scrap it because it didn't really fit in. Also, I don't watch KNTM so I have no idea what they did there. But if you want to talk me into writing you ChanTao couple yoga or really any other ChanTao, you know where to find me ^.~

Thank you for commenting, bb /squeezes you in an extra tight hug <3

wrongfox November 26 2014, 09:31:12 UTC

The way you built the setting really captivated me, it seemed so clear in my head and I could just envision everything happening. Hoo boy, that tension between Chanyeol and Tao was so strong I felt it kind of gnawing at me even just as a reader. This was a really interesting read, negl I'm a huge sucker for ~enemies~ to lovers fic and this definitely fit my itch \o/

eoryndal December 2 2014, 01:03:00 UTC

I know this isn't up everyone's alley, so I'm really glad you liked it <3 I was a bit nervous because it was my first time tackling this trope and I'm not the most confident of writers. Thank you for reading and commenting! /blushes at your compliments

bluedreaming November 29 2014, 03:38:16 UTC

Chantao is everything ♡ so violent, so passionate, so incompatible and yet perfect and I LOVED they way you built the tension and misunderstandings and I would have loved to get into Chanyeol's head too. Also I was curious about the ex ^^ but what's life without a little mystery. And I can't end without mentioning the setting because Germany! Berlin! This was perfect.

eoryndal December 2 2014, 01:27:59 UTC

They're so similar but so different, aren't they? Their dynamics intrigue me a lot ^^ One of my favourite pairings~ <3

Chanyeol, as I imagined him here, was really torn between his immediate attraction to Tao but also his annoyance with him which came from the way they always clashed (like when they disagreed about something, one would always say the wrong thing, so their fights would escalate) and from the way he felt unfairly treated by Tao (Chanyeol was really jealous of Suho, he wanted to be the one Tao opens up to and asks for advice). He didn't know how to approach Tao, for example he knew that Tao was scared of the dark and sometimes had nightmares, he wanted Tao to come to him and ask to be held and/or share the bed, but somehow he never offered, you know? So he had this growing frustration with himself, as well. And when he realized how much he wanted Tao but how far they were from having a good relationship, he sort of... ran away? He thought giving them space would be a good idea ( ... )