Need help. Your opinion.

[imokayyoureokay]

So just so you all know what's going on in my life right now, I have about 15 days left in this town. Eritheia is nowhere near as far along as it needs to be, but what else is new? Hans Winkerbean hasn't been shot yet. And also, Del and I both aren't famous yet

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[astro7x]

Looking for comments? Alright

[astro7x]

Something else that caught me while watching it a second time. I do take something back that could possibly speed up an aspect.

In the Looking Out For You segment... there is a segment at the desk that does an intro to the gag to come, and then there is the part with the 3D graph which continues to set up the gag. The problem is that both of these segments set up the gag, but they are not funny... is it possible to cut one of those? I believe it would leave the gag to follow intact, but speed it up a bit.

[imokayyoureokay]

Thanks for the quick and speedy feedback, dude.

I've started to consider all your criticisms. Real good criticism man. Thank you.