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May 12, 2009 23:51


Surface of a pond
Obscured by light and ripples
What can lie beneath?

ooc: I...have no idea why he's writing haiku.

fails to use journal properly, sasuke is deep and stuff, haiku

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ready_aim_toss May 13 2009, 05:47:41 UTC
...You sound like Professor Godot.

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ready_aim_toss May 13 2009, 05:50:16 UTC
Meaning that I have absolutely no idea what you're saying.

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impassive_eyes May 14 2009, 01:01:08 UTC
I...thought I'd made that private.

I thought girls liked it when guys write poetry, anyway.

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ready_aim_toss May 14 2009, 04:12:52 UTC
Really? Oops~

Well, it fits the syllable count, right? 5, 7, 5?

Maybe? I guess I just prefer to know what people are saying :P

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battle_in_bloom May 13 2009, 05:52:44 UTC
Is this the part where I get worried, or are you just being...

Since when did you write haiku?

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impassive_eyes May 14 2009, 01:01:49 UTC
...Since I was raised in a household steeped in Japanese culture...?

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battle_in_bloom May 14 2009, 04:08:10 UTC
Yes, but--

Haiku. And you. The two don't exactly...

You know what, never mind.

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impassive_eyes May 15 2009, 00:12:17 UTC
Yes, but-- Haiku and
you. The two don't exactly...
You know what, never mid.

Oh, so close, Sakura. The last line had six syllables.

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9_tailed_ramen May 13 2009, 10:27:33 UTC
Oi, teme.

What the hell?

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impassive_eyes May 14 2009, 01:03:04 UTC
What?

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9_tailed_ramen May 14 2009, 05:48:25 UTC
Heh, never knew you were into that sort of poetic stuff.

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impassive_eyes May 15 2009, 00:12:48 UTC
What, you're not? Oh, wait, that implies knowing how to read.

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tipofagunblade May 13 2009, 12:26:05 UTC
You know, I could tease you like I usually do, but it'd be easier just to say "you're a weird ass kid" and leave.

You're a weird ass kid.

ooc: don't bother replying unless you want to, just know he won't be reading it.

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impassive_eyes May 14 2009, 01:03:20 UTC
Thanks for that.

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impassive_eyes May 14 2009, 01:08:12 UTC
Yes, it is amazing, isn't it? I also come with a lifetime supply of passive-aggression free with your paid order.

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