Comments | imperfection_x: I wrote this..dont make fun i know i suck but, shhh.

imperfection_x

I wrote this..dont make fun i know i suck but, shhh.

Jan 27, 2004 18:44

"You feel the gun sinking through your thoughts into your hand, My love for you is like an insufficient heartbeat carving across your face with a knife "Goodbye, farewell, Ill forever miss you" as you walked away and i dissapeard ( Read more... )

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_lackofshame January 27 2004, 17:38:34 UTC

Rachael! that's REALLY good! seriously, wow.
i almost cried. no, i'm not kidding.

<3 bleedxtoxforget January 27 2004, 17:43:18 UTC

I talked to Chris, and I fo sho think he's okay. I know every guy has been an ass, and I know Chris and you didn't work out before... but I seriously think this time it's gonna work out. I kept telling you to wait, and you WOULD find a decent guy... well.. I think you found him. :)
I told Chris that if he hurts you, I would KILL him.. and you know I will. But I don't think you have to worry about that.

<3 Kristin <3

(P.S. I LOVE YOU!)

anonymous January 27 2004, 18:32:35 UTC

I thought ure poem was lovely as well but however i disagree with kristen just dont get ureself hurt by that fag ive seen it to much hope goes well -chase

*his love was like a parasite* anonymous January 28 2004, 10:27:31 UTC

I LOVE YOU... and that poem was like woah!!!! dont ever say u think that sucked because that is the best poem i have heard yet... see i can say my songs and poems suck but u can't cuz urs dont!!! i love you and i hope that everything works out and im always here for ya!!! *muah*

anonymous January 28 2004, 10:28:11 UTC

lol, by the way, that was me.. amber haha, i forgot to put a name down...haha