Ah, it read to me like Baekhyun was aiming for dark and kinky but got surprised by his own eagerness and by how much he wants (and likes) Chanyeol. Surprise feelings! Were a happy surprise! For me to read! (And maybe for baekyeol?)
I liked the teasing build-up of significant looks leading to their room mates all making excuses to be somewhere else, and the dirty talk from Baekhyun culminating in Chanyeol begging for him to come inside Chanyeol -- And there’s something so wretched and something so loving in Chanyeol’s voice that Baekhyun does come hard... I quote because I think that was my favourite line.
I haven't really thought of spitting as something as intimate as it is here, where it's both something that's part of the rough tone that Baekhyun's bringing to this scene as well as their intimacy and familiarity with each other.
Yesss! It must be the thing, it's just Chanyeol and you can't help it >> Besides due to ot12 promotions they haven't had much time for themselves so yep. FEELINGS HAPPENED.
Ah, I'm glad you like that line as I'm pretty content with it as well and it pretty much sums up how I wanted that baekyeol to be like.
I've been thinking how some people are averse to that idea and I'm able to comprehend why but as much as spitting on face may be a little humilating, spitting into sb's mouth is intimate.
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I liked the teasing build-up of significant looks leading to their room mates all making excuses to be somewhere else, and the dirty talk from Baekhyun culminating in Chanyeol begging for him to come inside Chanyeol -- And there’s something so wretched and something so loving in Chanyeol’s voice that Baekhyun does come hard... I quote because I think that was my favourite line.
I haven't really thought of spitting as something as intimate as it is here, where it's both something that's part of the rough tone that Baekhyun's bringing to this scene as well as their intimacy and familiarity with each other.
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Ah, I'm glad you like that line as I'm pretty content with it as well and it pretty much sums up how I wanted that baekyeol to be like.
I've been thinking how some people are averse to that idea and I'm able to comprehend why but as much as spitting on face may be a little humilating, spitting into sb's mouth is intimate.
Thank you for reading and your lovely comment! <3
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