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impossiblestar

fic: Acceptable Interaction

Aug 17, 2010 02:38

Title: Acceptable Interaction
Characters: Annie Walker, Auggie Anderson
Pairing: Annie/Auggie
Rating: PG-13, for heavy drinking, moderate swearing, and allusions to torture. Also cooties.
Word Count: 2160
Summary: Three times Annie hugged Auggie (and one time Auggie hugged her).
Author's note: Found this on the prompt meme (thanks, ohleeveeah!) and ( Read more... )

auggie anderson, annie/auggie, annie walker, fanfiction, covert affairs

Comments 23

asphaltangel August 21 2010, 02:40:56 UTC

I want to hug Auggie...

So, yeah, this is great. I like the intros to each of the pieces and how they go together. I squee in your general direction at the cuteness that is Auggie and Annie hugging under any and all circumstances.

And I have to say, "Despite this, Annie had found her personal Corner of Woe was the bathroom." is a very fun line.

impossiblestar August 21 2010, 03:51:00 UTC

Thank you! Thank you thank you thank you!

I agree with you that hugging between them is awesome. Perhaps we should glomp Auggie together! Team glomping! Team glompage!!!!! (Yeah, I'm super hyper late at night, can you tell?)

The Corner of Woe thing was a reference to TVTROPES, one of my many favorite sites (it's addicting). I thought it appropriate. :)

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CornerOfWoe

winehouse August 26 2010, 10:46:59 UTC

Hah, that ending was perfect: Auggie bringing up his affection at an inappropriate time and Annie being clueless for a split second before it all clicks. Thanks for this.

impossiblestar August 26 2010, 18:22:04 UTC

Thanks! I'm never sure on endings (they're my least favorite part of a story), so I'm glad you liked it. :)

! blondeshortie August 26 2010, 21:00:42 UTC

This was so great to read! You got the Annie/Auggie interaction perfectly! Cheers!

Re: ! impossiblestar August 27 2010, 00:26:43 UTC

Thank you! I love character interaction. I'm glad to see I did it well. :)

coltanheart September 6 2010, 09:11:14 UTC

Awww. So sweet, and sad, and you did a great job with Auggie and Annie's characterizations.

impossiblestar September 6 2010, 16:57:33 UTC

Thank you! Thank you so much!

rodlox September 28 2010, 05:20:00 UTC

perfect. simply perfect.

>Despite this, Auggie decided that it would be okay just this once.
>Or twice.
I have no doubt the feeling regarding that, is mutual.

impossiblestar September 28 2010, 23:14:27 UTC

:) Me, neither. Thanks for reviewing!