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fic:Holiday Joy(1/2)

Dec 15, 2010 01:04

Title: Holiday Joy(1/2)
Author:optimus_life
Pairing: Paul/Jacob
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU,dom Paul!,romance,fluff
Plot: Paul, Jacob and Jacob's baking turned into it's own short fic.
Word Count:482
A/N: Paul is 22 and Jacob is 18
This is my first fic featuring this pairing, so go easy
Twilight verse, so there's the pack etc
Thanks to xenasoul for her kink meme
Beta: All thanks ( Read more... )

fics: paul/jacob

Comments 20

twilighthdfan December 16 2010, 11:51:19 UTC

Ooh, love Jake in this. How he's all submissive and willing one second, and then the Alpha rears its head and he snaps in the next. And, LOL, Paul being a big tease is always fun to read.

Great fic. Loved it :D.

optimus_life December 17 2010, 00:03:13 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Moody Alpha in training Jacob and dominate Paul are my new favorite pairing of them.

xenasoul December 18 2010, 05:32:35 UTC

You had me at the Genre. lol

Seriously, I LOVE Jake's short temper and his submissive side. He can be the alpha all he wants with the pack, but in the bedroom Paul is the BOSS. *.*

Well done, hon!!

optimus_life December 18 2010, 05:49:43 UTC

Thank you. There will be more of this pairing don't worry.

xenasoul December 18 2010, 05:56:57 UTC

That's so good to know because this pairing needs more luving. :)

optimus_life December 18 2010, 06:00:48 UTC

I've got two months off for winter break, Eclipse on dvd and plenty of free time. :p

Yes this pairing needs more love,seriously.

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absinthechilde March 5 2011, 15:50:41 UTC

**Is it just me or is it hot in here...?**

Wow!

optimus_life March 5 2011, 19:57:03 UTC

Thank you. Wow, I can't believe I left this unfinished.

ze_waffles_gaga February 9 2012, 19:19:27 UTC

yeah you should finish :-D It''s good. I like the sub/dom thing that's going on with Jake

optimus_life February 9 2012, 20:28:06 UTC

I'll see if I can kick my muses into action and finish this. It's been hanging around for ages in my skull.

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fairygodmother9 February 24 2012, 21:59:47 UTC

I'm totally with the others. Love dom Paul and I have a kink for Jake trying to stand up to him and failing. Would love to read more.

optimus_life February 24 2012, 22:22:45 UTC

There would be more, if I could kick start my muse into working with me. Right now I'm working on a Jacob/Seth story and a Sam/Jacob one.

fairygodmother9 February 25 2012, 12:47:39 UTC

Oh, now you've got me in anticipation. I would love to read some Sam/Jacob!