Fic - "Noticed" - Shenko

[impsy2930]

Title: Noticed
Characters: Kaiden, female Shepard
Pairing: Shenko
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, fluff
Summary: Kaiden thinks about how often Shepard is recognized by everyone they encounter, but he doesn't realize how often her attention is directed at him. Oneshot, minor early romance spoilers.
Author's Notes: First Mass Effect fic, so constructive

Comments

[lady_boromir]

Absolutely lovely! You captured Kaidan's character very well and I especially liked the end where he tucked the loose strand of hair behind her ear. Awww!

Btw, I'd love to get all the in-game dialogue, if you could send it, that'd be awesome! I'd be extremely grateful. You can send it to NothingElseMatters64@gmail.com :)

[pookaseraph]

That was very sweet! Awww Kaiden.

I would also love that in game dialogue the email is my lj-name @gmail.com

[stormydawn111]

Lovely story :D I especially like how seamlessly the in-game dialogue fit into it.

I also would love the word doc of the in-game conversations :D my email is DarkAngel200@hotmail.com. Thanks!

[windbell]

Eeeee. I really like the way you described executed the dialogue at the end. Please tell me you're planning on writing some more ME stuff!

I'm joining the bandwagon -- I'd love to have that game dialogue. My username at livejournal.com, if you don't mind. :)