Comments | impulsiveanswer: Criminal Minds Fanfic: Step Up (Part 1 of 3)

impulsiveanswer

Criminal Minds Fanfic: Step Up (Part 1 of 3)

Jun 05, 2010 08:51

Title: Step Up
Part: 1 of 3
Pairing: Reid/Hotch
Characters: (in this part): Reid, Rossi, and Hotch; (in the whole story): Reid, Hotch, Rossi, Jessica, and a cameo by Jack
Rating: (this part): T; (entire story): M
Warnings: Slash, angst, some fluff (not really in this part)
Disclaimer: I do not own Criminal Minds - there'd be some boy-kissing in every ( Read more... )

fic, reid, criminal minds, hotch

Comments 55

rowena_dawson June 5 2010, 16:45:23 UTC

*sniffs* Oh my god....so...angsty...

My poor wittle Reid.

Anxiously awaiting the next ones! Keep up the good work. :)

impulsiveanswer June 6 2010, 17:37:02 UTC

Thank you! Reid's all angsty now, but he's in good hands :) I'll hopefully post again by the end of the week.

bowie28 June 5 2010, 17:53:56 UTC

I'm so glad you finished this and just waited for the editing because this is awesome. Descriptive stories are hard to come by so I've enjoyed this tremendously. The emotions were so real I could taste Spencer's loneliness. Plus your Rossi kicked serious ass. Please post more soon. <333

impulsiveanswer June 6 2010, 17:39:43 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! I'll hopefully post again by the end of the week.

drabbles_by_v June 5 2010, 18:57:21 UTC

Okay, time for you to post more. No, really. Right now. ...please?

I loved reading that. Normally I get bored with prose-heavy pieces, but this was just amazing. Rossi's voice was spot-on--actually, all of the characterization was wonderful. Plus there was a heavy dose of Reid-centric angst, and I can't wait for Rossi and Hotch and the team to help with that.

I kept finding lines as I was reading that I was going to put in the comment and say, "This one was the best!" but then I'd find another and now I've just forgotten them all amidst a jumble of a very well-crafted story. Thank you for sharing! :)

impulsiveanswer June 6 2010, 17:44:09 UTC

Now right now - the other parts aren't quite done yet :) Hopefully by the end of the week...

One of my major problems writing this was wondering if I could get away with something as prose-heavy as this needed to be, especially in part one. I'm glad it works. Thanks!

medoesspeak June 5 2010, 19:31:07 UTC

So so so so great. I almost started crying while reading poor Reid's sorrow.. He needs a hug. Seriosly. A big fat hug.

Rossi rules, totally! I don't really like Rossi, never have liked, but hey, fanfiction makes life a little bit nicer (at least for me, yay for not suffering every time Rossi says something on CM!). Now Hotch just has to pull himself together and freaking marry Reid or something like that (the big fat hug? at least?).

Loving this! More plz. Soon plz.

impulsiveanswer June 6 2010, 17:50:15 UTC

Hotch has his own issues to deal with, but maybe Reid will get his big fat hug (or more) in the end...

It took me a while to start warming up to Rossi, as he's such a big departure from Gideon and even noticeably different from the rest of the team. Now that I'm used to him and the way he interacts with people I do genuinely like him.

Thank you!

murgy31 June 5 2010, 20:03:39 UTC

OMG!!!! that was beyond awesome! Please update soon...

impulsiveanswer June 6 2010, 17:52:24 UTC

Thank you! I'll hopefully update by the end of the week.