CM Fic: Building a Home (Chapter 2/8)

Dec 22, 2010 09:23



Title: Building a Home (Part 2/8)

Rating: T

Pairings: Reid/Hotch (established relationship)

Characters (entire story): Reid, Hotch, Jack, Jessica, Garcia, Morgan, Prentiss, Rossi, and JJ

Characters (this part): Reid, Hotch, and Jack

Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is not mine.

Word Count (this part): 3,460

Summary (entire story): Aaron and Jack move in with ( Read more... )

fic, reid, criminal minds, hotch

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daylyn December 22 2010, 17:05:17 UTC
Very sweet. Spencer forgetting the COFFEE -- yeah, that's a turning point in his relationship with Jack (even if Jack doesn't know it yet). I love how you portrayed the awkwardness between them. I love how Reid took the idea of the "Reid Effect" to heart (even though he really should have known differently). And Reid's kitchen sounds just like a bachelor pad. I love Hotch's patience here, even through his slight exasperation at both of them. Definitely looking forward to more.

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impulsiveanswer December 23 2010, 13:54:52 UTC
Thanks! Jack and Reid have both gone through so much in their lives that it makes sense they would have a difficult time connecting with others. Poor Hotch - he just wants to make everything better but can't.

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devon99 December 22 2010, 21:23:19 UTC
I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic and look forward eagerly to the next part:)

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impulsiveanswer December 23 2010, 13:55:07 UTC
Thank you!

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amazing maclabv December 23 2010, 02:08:40 UTC
Just perfect. At last I found a fic that portrait the three of them in a non-dramatic way. THANK YOU!!!
I'll be looking forward to read more!

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Re: amazing impulsiveanswer December 23 2010, 13:56:53 UTC
Thanks! This fic will have some lighter moments and some heavier ones, but there won't be anything seriously angsty - it's more about the quiet moments that steer people's lives.

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impulsiveanswer December 26 2010, 12:38:19 UTC
I'm glad you like this!

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