CM Fic: Building a Home (Chapte 4/8)

Dec 29, 2010 10:03


Title: Building a Home (Part 4/8)

Rating: T

Pairings: Reid/Hotch (established relationship)

Characters (entire story): Reid, Hotch, Jack, Jessica, Garcia, Morgan, Prentiss, Rossi, and JJ

Characters (this part): Hotch, Reid, and Jack

Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is not mine.

Word Count: 3,910

Warning/A/N: Things get a little frisky in one section of this ( Read more... )

fic, reid, criminal minds, hotch

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daylyn December 29 2010, 16:38:15 UTC
This continues to be utterly awesome. I LOVE the 'creepy' laundry room escapade (Aaron, you really need to trust Spencer. He's a trained FBI agent. He knows creepy when he sees it.) I love Spencer being all worried about Jack when Aaron just thinks that 10 days have been long enough. (Oh and "And people think I’m weird" is utterly perfect.) I love how Jack and Spencer are building a relationship with each other over chess and playing in the park. And I can't wait to see what sort of surprise Aaron has planned with his renovations. Such a great fic. I feel all happy now.

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impulsiveanswer December 31 2010, 16:19:58 UTC
Thanks - I'm glad this made you happy! Aaron is an alpha male as well as someone who wants to fix people's problems, so it's always a balance for him of when to push Spencer and when to let him be and sometimes he doesn't quite get it right. But Spencer understands and loves him anyway :)

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bowie28 December 29 2010, 17:57:45 UTC
Reid in glasses is the epitome of sex on legs. XD

This is so wonderful. Can't wait to see Reid's reaction to Hotch's surprise. <3

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impulsiveanswer December 31 2010, 16:20:58 UTC
Agreed! I love Reid in his glasses. We definitely need to see more of that on the show...

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drabbles_by_v December 29 2010, 21:46:51 UTC
Hee, I can't wait to find out what the surprise is, exactly. It can't be an extra bedroom, because of course Aaron and Spencer would share the master...hmm. *ponders*

Other than that, sweet and sexy and adorable. Can't wait for the next update. ^^

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impulsiveanswer December 31 2010, 16:23:58 UTC
Thanks! The surprise will be something very fitting for Spencer, but you'll have to wait a few chapters before finding out what it is...

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gershwhen December 30 2010, 02:16:16 UTC
Great update! I love the whole laundry room description, Hotch should know by now to trust Spenser, that his concerns are usually justified :-)

Lots of nice detail in this one, thanks for sharing.

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impulsiveanswer December 31 2010, 16:26:54 UTC
Thanks! Believe it or not, the laundry room in this chapter was a slightly exaggerated version of the laundry room in a building I used to live in. It was just too "Criminal Minds"-sy for me not to work it into a story a some point :)

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blackcat348 December 30 2010, 09:33:04 UTC
wonderful as always! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

My guess for Spencer's suprise is a library with built in book shelves...

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impulsiveanswer December 31 2010, 16:27:59 UTC
Thank you! I will not confirm or deny that your guess is accurate; you'll find out if you're right in part 8.

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