Wrecking Ball (2/?): Started down on the road to sin

[imustgofirst]

Title: Wrecking Ball
Author: i-must-go-first
Fandom: Major Crimes
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: T; M for later chapters
Words Count: 5,670
Summary: Brenda Leigh had no choice but to admit it: having more time for the living just wasn't all it was cracked up to be. A Brenda/Sharon relationship story. High heels, firearms, angsty D.D.A.'s, ex-

Comments

[defyingnormalcy]

Updaaaaaate! :D

I really enjoy how you write the mystery into your fanfic. It doesn't feel forced, or silly, or like "oh well I guess I need some plot in between the romance" - which is sometimes the case with fics. But I never once feel that here, in fact I feel very much like I am reading a scrip as the plot unfolds. Nicely done.

(and please don't be too harsh on my poor Hobbs. *sniffle* :P)

Can't wait to read more! :D

[g_ww]

More, please.

I like this Sharon, and this chapter's insight into her new life with Rusty, although she obviously needs a friendly ear to unload some of this new stress.
And my heart goes out to poor Brenda for feeling so useless...

So: more, please.

[kdtb]

oooo i'm intrigued... i'm actually interested in the case, which doesn't always happen with me so thats awesome... and i love your sharon always. can't wait to see how everyone ends up entangled in this one. :)