Comments | imustgofirst: Major Crimes mothership fic: This is Not a Test (1/)

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Major Crimes mothership fic: This is Not a Test (1/)

Jun 23, 2013 12:14

Author: i-must-go-first
Fandom: Major Crimes
Relationship: Sharon/Rusty
Words: 1,819
Rating: K+
Summary: Sharon helps Rusty navigate between failure and success. My first little mothership venture.
Note: Set after 2.02, "False Pretenses." Spoilery. Thanks to ubiquitousmixie for saving me from myself with the beta.

This is Not a Test1 ( Read more... )

major crimes, fic, sharon raydor, rusty beck, fanfic, mothership

Comments 8

obsessive_a101 June 23 2013, 23:48:54 UTC

Oh my... this is so, SO gorgeous and not only are the voices very authentic and true to form and the characterizations spot-on, but the emotional honesty of this... It honestly hurts, but in a good way - in the way something might hurt initially but you know you'll feel better in the end.

I'm not sure if I'm actually making any sense, but I LOVED this fic! ♥

surena_13 June 24 2013, 17:10:45 UTC

Oh this was truly a great piece! Both the characters are just spot on. I think you might be the first writer to crawl into Rusty's head and do a perfect job of describing his thoughts.

This felt so right for them and it made me have even more feelings for the mothership. Is there any way we can get you on the writing team of Major Crimes?

ubiquitousmixie June 24 2013, 21:32:23 UTC

As you already know, I loved this short fic. (Well done, you, for writing something short! *wink*) You are so great at capturing the mood and voice of a character. This feels to me like it could be a deleted scene or something from the show because it's just so in character. It feels like a true, honest snapshot of their lives.

Your Sharon is truly one of the most authentic, realistic versions in this entire fandom. I hope you'll always keep writing and continue sharing these wonderful stories with us.