mix the chemicals right dear...

[in_srch_of_skye]

here's a poem/song whatever i wrote in school the other day. i needed to write something, and with some light prodding from jon, i decided to start writing again, so more soon im sure, just make sure and let me know how to make it better and what you like?

fake from id's to romancefill my lungs up with butane

Comments

[fromzerorocks]

to come run and save you?
or would you rather sit and die,
then dare to look into my eyes,
and tell me you need me...

i really like that part^^^^ its really good!! loved the whole thing..

your tears hit the floor,<<<
but you're years to late,<<<<<< and as the pain flows away,
the engine sings me to sleep.
that one too^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
:)

[tennischic28]

You are a good writer,
I liked that song.
It was depressing, but that's how it goes, so yeah...
I liked it.
You should write more.

[iloveyatoobabe]

That's good Rey, you're really have a way with words and everything when it comes to writing. Good stuff.

PATS FOR Rey!

[cher912sp]

That was very good, just like every thing else that I have read!!!!! Keep going strong!
love Peace and Chicken Grease

[farfromreach]

beautiful. probably the best writing i've ever read from you. poetic as shit...and thats a good thing. can i make it a song? you always said i could with your old ones but i'd really like to make this into a song. it needs something more than just words to be read. it needs to be heard...good job my friend. hopefully you can come home soon
-LongJon

[in_srch_of_skye]

thanks buddy, i appreciate it, a lot - especially from you. of course you can make it a song, ive always told you that you could, and unless i ever make any future writings into songs, the offer will always be there, however i want to help, so we'll work on it maybe next visit if theres time, i hopefully will be home soon. peace homeslice,

-reynaldo

[farfromreach]

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