im writing again, these letters to you...

Feb 11, 2004 01:11

here are some poems i wrote about 2 weeks ago, click each link to read it... feel free to comment...
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from the inside )

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spiderbite99 February 10 2004, 22:25:28 UTC
wow, reality sets in with that poem...
ive been thinkin about exactly this kinda stuff lately
yur words express a lot...props ~ mad props dude

a hole in my soul that just wont fill
i throw in everything that i can
search for people to make me feel alrite
but they dont know
what theyre getting into
a laugh and a smile
they used to make everything
but now its just empty space
inside of me
and what could fill this void
when i dont know what dug it out
in the first place

gold, pure gold - the more i think about this part, the more i can relate...

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glowie_doll February 10 2004, 22:29:40 UTC
Kewl poem, sounds more like a song, but I like it. Very deep. And I'm the first to comment Woo-hoo. Sorry, got excited, it happens.
Forever and Always,
Anda

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heh in_srch_of_skye February 10 2004, 22:43:58 UTC
thanks guys, chase - glad you can relate, its all from the heart, i dont think it, i just write what i feel.

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Re: heh spiderbite99 February 11 2004, 16:27:44 UTC
lip piercing looks sweet...

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Re: heh kissmebaby February 11 2004, 17:43:06 UTC
correction, it looks HOT.

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kissmebaby February 11 2004, 17:46:08 UTC
you write so well <3

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Re: in_srch_of_skye February 11 2004, 18:46:09 UTC
well thank you darling.

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wow... anonymous February 12 2004, 15:44:12 UTC
"my indecision will be the destruction of me"
seriously, the story of my life lies in that one line. your writings are so awesome, i'm speechless. have you ever thought about being a song writer or something? cause you would definitly go far with that. I hope you feel better...

much love,
Nicolle
..sorry, don't have an lj, but i was looking around other people's and i found yours, so hope you don't mind me reading it :)

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