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Indeterminable In The Sunlight

Mar 27, 2008 15:18

Title: Indeterminable In The Sunlight
Author: inabasket
Rating: G
Disclaimer: This has not happened.
Characters: Adam Lazzara and John Nolan.
Word Count: 882
Prompt: jingle (for spittingink )
Summary: Adam has always just had this thing for ants.
Notes: Something short and cutesy, mostly for likeanaccidentx, who really likes Adam and John. This is moderately pointless and ( Read more... )

long island, adam lazzara, adam/john, john nolan

Comments 27

shinsolo March 28 2008, 13:48:28 UTC

Wow . . . That was my first reaction when a friend of mine copy and pasted the first paragraph to me around 1:30am . . and it's still the first reaction I have now after I've actually read the whole thing. And the strange thing? I'm not even sure why! That has to be one of the most interesting things I've read in a while! Something about Adam and ants just . . . just the way he thought about everything . . . he reminded me almost of my little sister . . and how John went to find him? only for him to drift off again back to his ants? He was so childlike and just . . . i dont know if perfect's the best word to describe his mannerisms but thats the word i'm gonna use anyways! I mean, when Sheesha first showed this to me . . . I didnt know where she was getting it! I assumed it was an older fic she'd seen somewhere and had just decided to bust out and tell me about (gotta love random people), but after I'd posted my Jesse fic on spb and then when i was looking to make sure it posted right . . and i saw the ants thing . . . i ( ... )

inabasket March 28 2008, 15:12:26 UTC

Wow, oh my god. You guys are the sweetest. I'm glad you found it so interesting, haha. Gosh, that's so flattering. Thank you so so so much, this totally just made my day. (Ps I'll probably end up reading what you just posted.)

So much love! ♥

shinsolo March 28 2008, 21:03:33 UTC

ha! you're totally welcome! I'm glad I could make your day. lol

divvy March 30 2008, 12:30:21 UTC

i love adam. and john. and you tbh

inabasket March 30 2008, 23:31:17 UTC

This is an amazing comment

megyal March 31 2008, 15:03:59 UTC

I like the light air in this, especially the part about them having their own little world. It seems so quiet and happy.

inabasket April 1 2008, 03:13:05 UTC

I'm glad! Thank you. (:

_poetic_harlot_ March 31 2008, 15:40:35 UTC

D: I thought I had commented already, haha. Wow, Kelly, way to fail.

Okay, so I have to say that I love stories where Adam Lazzara is a big, grinning man-child. That's just such a neat thing to write, especially since there are tons of different paths you could take and...yes. The ants! This was epic sweetness and it ended in just the right place to both be satisfying and infuriating because I want more! XP

You're love.

inabasket April 1 2008, 03:12:25 UTC

Haha, aww. You never fail.

I love man-boy Larzaza. I am actually tolerating him more and more these days, and I almost feel like I am insulting him by keeping this fic here. But! Whatever. Hahah. I am glad you liked this, though. I am not sure how to have ended this since it was just a stupid ramble, so I am glad it is even noticable.

_poetic_harlot_ April 1 2008, 03:52:30 UTC

Pssh. It is not stupid or a ramble. I liked it. So there. All hail Kelly and her opinion. And...if that argument doesn't hold up, IT IS MY BIRTHDAY SATURDAY SO YOU NEED TO SMILE AND NOD AT LEAST UNTIL THEN.

:D

inabasket April 1 2008, 03:57:14 UTC

OH GOSH, is it? Do you want anything from me? Haha.

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