Fanfiction: English as a Second Language

[inafrozenworld]

Title: English as a Second Language
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He was already tackling his ex-wife, custody over their two small children and his new life alone, he was expecting a mysterious foreign lodger to be a hassle… quite the opposite… A single chance encounter brought them together for the better.
Disclaimer: These characters are too epic to be

Comments

[inafrozenworld]

Thank you :)

Not going on this site and trying to pick up a story after months... Going good!

[dgm_loves_brawl]

Ah! I love it still! Where have you been? I expected like... a hundred more chapters out of you! T_T I missed it! Did something happen? Are you okay? Wait, you forgot who I am, didn't you...

[inafrozenworld]

I do remember you - you always had the silly comment subjects :) And er... uni happened? Everything's fine but I guess I got a bit busier about the same time I got better at procrastinating is all :/ I'm happy to see you back and I'm glad you still like it ^^

What a GREAT way to be remembered... ^^;

[dgm_loves_brawl]

Aw! o////o Thanks for not going TO crazy with your post! I hope I can keep up again... *sniffle* I miss middle school...

(and they were NOT silly! >_<; )

Lol okay, I don't remember you just for those xD;

[inafrozenworld]

After my exams I'll have a pretty long holiday so things could pick up then :)

(Do you want me to point you to a Chupracaba(?) conversation? =_=)

[taigrin]

Mio is a cockblocker! Hahahaha.

This chapter has been really sad, all about the departure and the farewell... you even made me sad!

I guess that first kiss you showed us the first time is going to happen really soon, right? :D

[inafrozenworld]

XDDD Please don't tempt me for when they start nearing the real deal.

I really hope that's a good thing here! I keep getting surprised when I'm told it was sad and then realise it was meant to be *facepalm*

You'll never stop asking till it happens, right? Soon :D

[taigrin]

It's a great thing that you're able to trasmit so much with words, specially sadness! :D

(And I know, I'm not so impatient about it now because I thought it would be their 1st kiss with no relationship between them yet but I'm looking forward to it anyway. You know I won't stop asking it... XD)

[inafrozenworld]

Thank you! I'm really happy you think so :D

(If it's not the next chapter then it's the one after it but I really hope it's the next one because otherwise that may be stretching things out too far :/ but we'll see)

[fynn_888]

Heeee~y

[inafrozenworld]

I think that's one of the most unusual but best descriptions for writing I've heard XD Thank you so much - you make it sound far too beautiful! ^^ And I'm so glad you feel that way while reading it! Ironically I usually end up writing angst so I'm really happy you think this one has such a different feel and pace! Thank you!

I got an email back about the German but forgot to change it *facepalm* that's it now! She said exactly the same as you except she used a different expression for 'to be lucky'? I hope that's them all sorted now :D Thank you for the corrections! It's a big help! In particular, I didn't know that difference between 'sollen' and 'sollten' :O I'll definitely keep it in mind! Thanks!

Your English isn't bad though :D considering you don't use it every day, it's really good!

Yayyyyy!!! (again)

[lesafe]

The first time I read this chapter I cried. You see, it was around the date I finished my teaching practices with children, and it was so awful to say goodbye, there was even a person who stopped me on the street because she thought something horrible had happened to me, imagine that. So, when I read this, I was deeply touched. It was like reliving the experience again

[inafrozenworld]

You're not the only person who's cried and that's something I completely wasn't expecting o_____o But seeing as you were leaving those children yourself, that's completely understandable! You must have been really upset if someone actually stopped you ;o