Aw, the description of Kurogane's feelings and sensations while Fai is kissing him the 1st time is really powerful, it made me feel warm in the inside :)
Hmm^^ A nearly lyrical piece, very nice descriptions, but yes, very sappy. This is supposed to be post-series? Then Sakura's no longer with them... unless you count Mokona.
How the hell did you manage to NEARLY set fire to a chip in the microwave??? Sounds like a hilarious story. As for the inspirational low for fanfiction.. that happens to everyone occassionally. Usually when real life comes knocking on your door...*sigh* Best of luck with regaining your muses though! *sends you sparkly plot bunnies and a piece of my chocolate cake*
You know how much I love this piece! Especially how Fai takes the initiative and the sloppiness of the forehead kiss and how Fai is almost on his tiptoes. and ffdsf everything!
And you! Remove that "fail" tag! DX.
and t'was the microwaves fault, as you know Microwaves nuke radiate your food and are horrible little.. box...things.
...... Feeny, they were microwavable chips -____- And they don't nuke food, they use high frequency electromagnetic radiation of a wavelength between radio waves and IR waves to transform the photons of energy in the microwaves into kinetic energy through dielectric heating. Molecules allign themselves in electromagnetic fields and when that field switches, the rotation of the molecules it creates kinetic energy which is defined as heat ....... so neh.
Thank you :DDDD I've never really seen much of the difference in who takes the initiative so long as Fye isn't flailing too much!! Eeeee just so happy you liked the details!
*stares and blinks* … I still don’t like microwaves. ..and they make microwave-able chips omg nu! D8.
I like Kurogane taking the initiative too, It’s just after being so unsure of himself for more than half the manga Fai taking a step like that is just air punchingly awesome :’ 3
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A nearly lyrical piece, very nice descriptions, but yes, very sappy. This is supposed to be post-series? Then Sakura's no longer with them... unless you count Mokona.
How the hell did you manage to NEARLY set fire to a chip in the microwave??? Sounds like a hilarious story. As for the inspirational low for fanfiction.. that happens to everyone occassionally. Usually when real life comes knocking on your door...*sigh*
Best of luck with regaining your muses though!
*sends you sparkly plot bunnies and a piece of my chocolate cake*
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You know how much I love this piece! Especially how Fai takes the initiative and the sloppiness of the forehead kiss and how Fai is almost on his tiptoes. and ffdsf everything!
And you! Remove that "fail" tag! DX.
and t'was the microwaves fault, as you know Microwaves nuke radiate your food and are horrible little.. box...things.
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Thank you :DDDD I've never really seen much of the difference in who takes the initiative so long as Fye isn't flailing too much!! Eeeee just so happy you liked the details!
AND I'LL NEVER REMOVE THE FAIL D
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I like Kurogane taking the initiative too, It’s just after being so unsure of himself for more than half the manga Fai taking a step like that is just air punchingly awesome :’ 3
BUT THERE BE NO FAIL HERE!
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They've been making them since I was a kid anyways o___o;;
Aaaah! I see! I love that aspect of it too 8D but the Kuro being an awkward romantic sort of balances it in a weird way?
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