Guilt And Redemption - Part Three

[inarrasnape]

Title: Guilt And Redemption - Redemption
Fandom: Harry Potter; Bill/Hermione; Canon Compliant through HBP
Rating: Adult, includes graphic description of sex between two adults - slight dubious consent. Character Death.
Summary: Darker three part sequel to Room of Requirements Written with the greatest respect to JKR and thanks to her for allowing

Comments

[grammypat]

Have just printed these out so I can read them. Will comment soon.
Question.....are there other changes to the the Silver Chain other than the Addendum that I should go back to?

OMG

[grammypat]

This definitely wasn't as subtly romantic as the Silver Chain. And, although visually very graphic emotionally stimulating, it never exceeded the limits of really well written soft porn. **giggles**

I love the idea of the Black's Room of Requirements.....
"..it was created to ensure arranged marriages were consummated. Those arranging the marriages hardly cared if the couples shared love."

You did a really neat job with descriptions of, um, various part of the room's decor.

I particularly enjoyed the tension vs relaxation you created between Hermione and Bill before they actually 'got down to the business at hand.'

...if I'm unsatisfied, do I get my money back?.....Oh, satisfaction is guaranteed, he assured her, his eyes glinting in humour.Could you possibly have chosen a more guilt rendering situation? Classic with all the emotional/social barriers to be overcome before the fullness of their relationship even has a chance of surviving let alone blossoming. Then add Hermione's relationship with Ron and Harry coupled with their

Re: OMG

[simi]

*giggles*

Glad you liked it ;-)

[cafemercury]

OK, this started out as smut and made me cry at the end. How do you do that?

Between this and "Healing Auras," you and your sister have turned me into a die-hard Bill/Hermione shipper, whatever JKR's take was the matter, hee. (I don't hate Fleur like many others do, but agree that she's too much of a princess for any Weasley.) I love the dynamic you set up between Bill and Hermione -- their "this is just sex" talk, though everything that's left unspoken suggest that it certainly isn't.

My favorite thing, though: I love, love, LOVE that Black RoR. That touch is perfection. I have a ficlet bouncing around in my head about Sirius' parents (I know I said I was quitting but dammit, what can one do about plot bunnies?), and let's just say I wish I had thought of it first.

*claps*

[simi]

*grins* Thank you! You know 'Healing Auras' evolved in response to a challenge I issued Mandy, right?

I love Bill/Hermione, and there's several on SHex's 'The Burrow' that are well worth searching out. The idea of Hermione finding romantic love with one of Ron's older brothers is just too much fun to pass up!