Comments | incandescent: Fiction: "black water"

incandescent

Fiction: "black water"

Jan 21, 2017 16:53

black water
--a fairy tale for the prompt "monsters" by wildrose

( Once upon a time... )

Comments 11

qwentoozla January 22 2017, 09:32:35 UTC

I love the tone of this story, the fairy tale menace. It actually made me think of the art an old LJ friend of mine used to do, I could imagine her illustrating this. If only she was still on LJ! :)

incandescent January 22 2017, 14:26:23 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I really had a fun time writing this. The fairy tale tone is so wonderful.

And oh, I would love that if it could be true! Art for stories is the most amazing thing. *__*

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incandescent January 23 2017, 01:00:29 UTC

You're welcome! I'm so glad you like it! The chill was just what I was going for. :)

akatsuki210 January 22 2017, 16:26:36 UTC

I love the atmosphere in this story. It really did feel like an old legend or fairy tale.

incandescent January 23 2017, 01:01:28 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad to hear that! And I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading. :)

lantairvlea January 23 2017, 17:12:49 UTC

Nicely done!

incandescent January 23 2017, 22:55:22 UTC

Thank you! :)

northernwalker January 24 2017, 03:27:56 UTC

Beautiful and haunting and eerie.

incandescent January 24 2017, 11:20:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad it worked for you!