Fiction: "the inescapable sensation of flying just before you hit the ground"

[incandescent]

the inescapable sensation of flying just before you hit the ground
--for cookielaura and her lovely prompt of "dying embers" (I feel like I should apologize, because this is a lot stranger than I intended. But it's also completely me, so I won't grovel too much. I also ride the English language and perspective pretty hard in this, so prepare yourself.)

Comments

[qwentoozla]

Oh, I LOVE this one. Such a sense of shadowy menace.

[incandescent]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it was menacing. Just my plan. :)

[cookielaura]

Ooh this is fantastic! It's so evocative. I love the ending, brilliant twist.

Thank you for writing this for me :D

[incandescent]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and it was a real pleasure to write! ♥ It makes me so happy to know that you like it.