Fiction: "the empty sky above"

[incandescent]

the empty sky above
--for interfaceleader's prompt: "She would never go home again." I'm sure it isn't what she wanted, but... that's how these things go, I guess. Hope she likes it anyway!

Comments

[xfirefly9x]

Love this. It has that perfect feeling of impulsive almost recklessness driven by whatever event led to this moment - if that makes sense?

[incandescent]

Thank you! I tried to make the sentence structure mirror the plotting, and I'm so glad it worked for you! :)

[interfaceleader]

I really like this.

[incandescent]

I'm so glad! Thank you!