notes for veni vidi vici

[incessance]

this post contains notes and explanations for the story veni vidi vici. because of my confusing prose and unclear phrasing of events in the story, i hope this will help previous readers understand what is going on in the story and what i tried to do with various themes. i really did try to layer a lot in the dialogue and phrasing, so...here goes

Comments

[chikaon08]

Dang, when I got your message about an explanation, I wasn't expecting like a paragraph reply at the bottom of your fic....not THIS. But I'm very glad you spent the time to write out all of this because I found it very interesting and it's obvious you put a lot of thought into every single word written.

It makes plenty of sense now and I definitely learned a lot. I didn't know some of the facts you've referenced so thanks for that!

Overall, it's a great character study and I can definitely see this happening although I don't believe it's true, but it certainly is plausible. You've written their sisterly dynamics very well. I definitely argue with my sister like this a lot and I dunno, I really enjoyed this as a piece as well haha. Dunno what else to say.

Anyway thanks again for this essay. It's a great piece on its own and although your original piece was vague and I guess a lot of people didn't grasp the entire concept, I think its vagueness is part of the charm (so don't change anything! XD).

Happy New Year! :)

[chikaon08]

*I WAS expecting

Agh stupid typos DX

[incessance]

glad it served its purpose, happy new year!

[cagallisakura]

Lol I was slow to read this so by the time I did, it was revealed that Amber is back xD

Wow thanks a lot for this, it really helped clear up many parts for me and I think I understand this better now^^

[incessance]

i'm so ecstatic that amber's back! need to write something about her homecoming...:p