another happy day - and it's rising still (oneshot)

[perfectlystill]

Title: And It's Rising Still
Pairing/Characters: Alice/Elliot
Summary: They blink at the television as a program they already watched gets replayed. Elliot reaches for the remote and mutes its, not letting go of her hand. The quiet feels fragile, like there’s some static humming beneath it, ready to shock them out of their skin. Alice tightens her

Comments

[falseeeyelashes]

Oh man, I was totally the one who prompted this at the Porn Battle! And I completely did it on a whim, so imagine my surprise that not only was it filled, but written so well!

This is really, really great, and I love how you've written both Elliot and Alice here and how well they hew to their movie characterizations.

Elliot blinks, his face going blank, and for a second Alice thinks he doesn’t, but then he presses his mouth to hers, hard and hungry.

FANTASTIC! Thank you so much for writing this! I really and truly enjoyed reading this!

[perfectlystill]

I am so glad you prompted this! I loved the movie because intense!family!drama but I really wanted Alice and Elliot to makeout because that is how I role, so thank you for prompting and for this comment.

[breakingsilence]

Ugh emmaaaa this was wonderful, I cannot believe you didn't link me to this before. The last line had me feeling kind of weepy and I could see all this perfectly in my mind, perf perf perf

[perfectlystill]

shh you are too kind to me. but thank you. <3333