rory/jess - only the margin left (oneshot)

Feb 09, 2012 09:53

Title: Only the Margin Left
Pairing/Characters: Rory/Jess
Summary: They are fact mixing with fiction, making her bones ache and her heart beat faster.
Rating: R (sexual content)
Word Count: 1,200
Disclaimer: I do not own anything. Title from Dodie Smith's novel I Capture the Castle.
Author's Note: Written for Porn Battle XIII using the prompts ( Read more... )

tv: gilmore girls, type: fic, pairing: jess/rory

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kindness_says February 10 2012, 08:42:39 UTC
Ugh, god, it is like you're the happiness fairy tonight!

I don't even know, THESE TWO. I don't remember loving them that much when I first watched GG - particularly at the beginning, it's like, ugh, everyone, stop it - but then - for any number of reasons - or maybe it wasn't until Porn Battle this time last year, when someone prompted "wedding night" and inexplicably I decided to write it? I don't knooooow.

Ugh, them. <33333333333333333333333

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perfectlystill February 10 2012, 15:27:04 UTC
<3333

I really adore these two, but I was not on board at all the first time I watched either. Somehow that changed when something in my brain clicked, so you're not alone there.

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rosegilmore February 13 2012, 04:46:05 UTC
i think this is my new headcanon for these two. :) so perfect.

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perfectlystill February 13 2012, 13:35:25 UTC
Oh, wow! I'm glad you liked it.

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fromiftowhen February 17 2012, 16:42:16 UTC
This is pretty perfect. I'm such a fan of stories for these two that feature very little, if any, dialogue. It just fits, and I think you really got that right here. This is really beautifully written, and the spacing of the paragraphs really works too, somehow, to set the tone (even if it was just a formatting thing!)

I (clearly) really enjoyed this. Great job!

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perfectlystill February 18 2012, 21:29:51 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thought it worked!

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ibonekoen February 17 2012, 20:09:32 UTC
Love it. Perfectly them. ♥

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perfectlystill February 18 2012, 21:30:19 UTC
Thanks!

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svgurl February 18 2012, 06:39:50 UTC
I love this. It's been a while since I've read anything for these two but I definitely considered them an OTP and this fic is just awesome. You captured Rory's voice perfectly and even your Jess was great. I could imagine his actions like you portrayed them, like the way he said 'i love you'. So Jess. I like the pacing too and even the formatting really worked for me. And the ending was lovely. It made me smile. Wonderful job! :D

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perfectlystill February 18 2012, 21:30:48 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you thought it was in character and that the pacing worked.

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