I love how this is more realistic than the show. The rum and coke and the bro-code parts were a nice touch as were the comments teenagers would make but wouldn't be appropriate for Nick. And you made Cat cute (“On an adventure?”), but not totally random in an attempt to be funny ("Does my thumb look Spanish?" or whatever it was). Awesome. My favourite Cat part would have to be the “I’m sorry if I was ever mean to you.”/“Thanks. Me too.” exchange though. I could picture it playing out in my head and it felt like a genuine friendship moment between the two
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Thank you! I do think as teenagers they would dabble in normal teenage things, drinking and parties and sex, not that all teenagers do those things (i never did tbh) but they go to a performing arts school and come on. I know why Nick can't go there though. And I'm glad you enjoyed Cat here and the Cat/Jade friendship!
Tori/Andre! I just want those two to makeout. I don't think that's too much to ask.
This comment is so delightful and is giving me so much life. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such wonderful feedback.
(also, as if Beck and Jade weren't enough you felt the need to stab me in the heart with UNREQUITED CAT/JADE FEELINGS? Man, Emma, you are such a jerk.)
I honestly loved this, this entire loooong-ass thing from start to finish, I can't even. You MUST keep writing for Beck/Jade. It's so rare to see a writer who gets the characters this well. :)
I can't even hardly process this. It's absolutely amazing. I actually logged into my LJ account for the first time in what I'm pretty sure has been over a year just to comment on this, but oh. my. god. The characters were so absolutely dead on, and you kept just enough of the show's canon for it to be genuine, and added enough of your own stuff for it to be realistic. God, I just want to cry over how perfect this is. I also loved the full-circle thing with the "the world tilts" line. Absolutely fantastic. Sorry for the ridiculously long comment lol.
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Tori/Andre! I just want those two to makeout. I don't think that's too much to ask.
This comment is so delightful and is giving me so much life. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such wonderful feedback.
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HELP
I CAN'T
SO MUCH PATHOS
(also, as if Beck and Jade weren't enough you felt the need to stab me in the heart with UNREQUITED CAT/JADE FEELINGS? Man, Emma, you are such a jerk.)
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(i couldn't help it. nobody write cat and jade like i want them to. i am an asshole.)
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