mini/liv: sour in the summer heat (oneshot, pg)

[perfectlystill]

Title: Sour in the Summer Heat
Pairing/Characters: Mini McGuinness/Liv Malone
Summary: She laughs quietly and Mini imagines the air is so thick it swallows the sound, leaving the room caked in silence. She imagines it also swallows her thoughts, the ones she doesn't want Liv to know about, that she takes and tucks behind her eyelids, only

Comments

[stainofmylove]

Oh man, this is wonderful, thank you so much! I really love your approach to Mini's POV, it feels sorta like skipping a rock in a pond, trying to skim the surface but ending up plunging in just slightly more and more until the rock drops. It really fits for how I saw Mini (and Mini's approach to her sexuality) in the 5th series. And these summery snippets of them just hanging out in each other's room feel like so much more, and then the way they talk about Mini's mother instead of/standing in for themselves ... just fantastic, a really great read.

[perfectlystill]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[sweetbeing]

This is magnificent. I love how you wrote Mini's inner struggle. Very believable. And THANK GOD for someone finally acknowledging the most obvious and sensible ship in all of Gen. 3. Fantastic writing. The way you captured Mini and Liv's relationship is just beautiful.

[perfectlystill]

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked this and thought it was believable.

[sweetbeing]

No problem! :D Great writing.

[perfectlystill]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this and that I can make you believe in Mini/Liv, even if only in snippets.