rpf: here comes the rush before (camila cabello/lauren jauregui)

[perfectlystill]

Title: Here Comes the Rush Before
Pairing/Characters: Camila Cabello/Lauren Jauregui
Summary: The first time she really notices Lauren -- and Camila likes to think this distinction is important, as though maybe they walked by each other in the mall one day with their separate friends during the time when they lived separate lives -- they’re at

Comments

[jadewest]

GOD!!!!!!!!!!
okay, i'm bad at reviews, but. things:
- i super love your camila voice. in all of it, but especially the first half. and how you can see the blurred lines between i like her and i like her, and how you can't pinpoint exactly when that happened but you don't care because camila doesn't care and everything is wonderful
- FLOP 3 SHADE <3
- dinah's existence in this gave me life
- there are a lot of great lines in this, but my favorite is the pizza/pie thing and the subtle 'peasants' shade because lol tumblr lol.
- I LOVE YOU A LOT AND I WILL PROBABLY GET THIS FIC TATTOOED ONTO MY SKIN (too much? oops)

[perfectlystill]

You are a beautiful tropical fish!!!

But, really, I'm glad you enjoyed this because I ended up enjoying the writing of it a lot after taking about 4 days to write the first 1500 words of it. And yes, I didn't want Camila to put too much thought it to how she liked Lauren and how much she liked Lauren until she was kind of like oh, that makes sense, and I'm glad it worked for you.

FLOP 3, dude. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY THEY ARE ALLOWED. And Dinah!!!!! She's so much fun. And lol tumblr 5ever.

TOO MUCH? WHAT'S TOO MUCH?

Thank you for flailing with me and being in my brain too much and reading and commenting, you beautiful rule-breaking moth <333

[absoluteares]

GOOD MORNING TO ME. Waking up to this feels as great as rich kids probably feel on christmas morning. Or so I assume.

I LIKE ALL OF THE THINGS. But my secret favorite is the "I liked you, too. I always liked you, too." Because it's possible to like more than one person!!! And to like them a lot but differently!!! Which you obviously understand (and you write it SO WELL.)

Also just covering all the connections within the group. Like Lauren finding out Ally's the real deal, or Camila not knowing right away where she stood with Normani. And how parallel they all are a lot of the time. Also Dinah just being Dinah always hehehe.

CAMILA'S FEELINGS ABOUT STORIES AND MOVIES AWH YEAH. BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN IT ISN'T GOOD OR DOESN'T MATTER. I feel it, girl. I feel it.

All around this was really super satisfying and you're the greatest.

[perfectlystill]

ARES. You are a star and waking up this comment was the same for me!

Yes, you can like more than one person at the same time!!! It's possible!!! And I'm really happy you thought I wrote that well. Because it could be super tricky, I think? But yes, thank you.

Ares, I'm so glad you liked this and I love you so much <33333

[hariboo]

i CAN'T BELIEVE I'M HERE READING THIS, EMMA.

I HATE YOU. I'M WALKING AWAY.

(it was super cute and sweet and awwwwwww bb girlfriends! and camilla's pov was so sweet and funny! bb girl with her crush and feelings!!! that gif is perf btw, i need to find that interview.)

STILL TOTALLY WALKING AWAY.

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YOU LOVE ME.

(And thank you! that gif is from this interview and it's horrible quality but what can you do?)

HAHAHAHAHA, I NEED TO WALK AWAY, TOO.

[anonymous]

It's three o' clock in the morning, and your story gave me too many feels. I haven't even made an account, and now I'm reviewing because honestly, this couldn't wait. This story was fabulous, even more fabulous than that time I found a Hawaii quarter in my pocket. A HAWAII QUARTER. IT HAD A VOLCANO ON IT. A SEXY ONE. YOUR STORY IS EVEN BETTER THAN THAT. It had this weird subtley to it, that made me want to eat a turnip and talk about cheese with my long lost Russian Uncle Kleetus. Which means, I LOVED IT.