rpf: look how far we've grown (camila cabello/lauren jauregui) [3/3]

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God, I like the kudos button but also I hate the kudos button: a struggle.

Thank you!!! This comment is really wonderful and a lot and I'm having difficulty replying to it. I'm glad you enjoyed this, Leila! I'm obsessed with physicality so that paragraph is doing A Lot for me, right now. I wish I could say something better in response to this but I feel like you understood a lot of what I was trying to do and I feel like !!! mostly. So, thank you so much for reading and commenting. I love you.

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Everything is so realistic and that's what makes your writing so effective and it aims straight for the heart -- and you're really good at capturing, like, the nuances of their relationship? Like, the little details of who they are and even in an au, it shines through so beautifully, and it's genius or something, but it's like you take these two people and make them fall together in the simplest of ways, yet it works. And also, may I mention how important the Women's Lit. part was and how Lauren didn't remember Camila and it's just -- it's such a subtle way to highlight their insecurities, and just. This is beautiful.

I will forever look forward to an 80k+ word fic from you because wouldn't that just be amazing?

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you think my writing is realistic and that the details of it work. Making the girls the same but also different, because of life experiences in au's, is always tricky, and I'm so happy to hear what I've done here works for you. This is such a sweet comment and I really appreciate it. Thank you again.

And omg. Maybe someday!

[7muses]

I just re-read this and also downloaded an epub version of this because I like to keep it on my phone and read it whenever I feel like I need to be assaulted by a barrage of emotions.