Three cold fingers on my elbow

Nov 04, 2008 16:58

Title: Three Cold Fingers On My Elbow
Author: Me.
Pairing: PoynterJones
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I owe nothing 'cept for the plot.
Warning(s): Slash

Oh, and just a warning, all my fics are un-beta'd. I don't even know what a beta is.

*cue horrified gasps from fandom*

His hands were abnormally large. )

p: dougie poynter/danny jones, fandom: mcfly

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lost_in_the_zoo November 4 2008, 12:56:07 UTC
“I can strap him to a chair and force him to watch Brokeback Mountain on repeat if you want."
I loved Harry in this. (Usually he's an ass)

I kinda remember reading this, but I didn't remember the ending. Are they together? Or what? :( I'm so confused.

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incrediblygone November 15 2008, 16:42:34 UTC
He may be an ass, but we forgive him. (:

And no, they don't end up together. Sorry if I ended kind of ambiguously. Danny remains straight and Dougie's, well, Dougie.

Sad, innit?

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figletofvenice November 4 2008, 23:16:09 UTC
This is a nice read. I like how minimalistic and sparse your language is, and I like how you've characterized Dougie. Thanks for posting!

(Not sure if you care, but you change tenses near the end, and I wasn't sure if you'd noticed. The last few scenes are in present tense when the rest of the fic is in the past. Just thought I'd point it out.)

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incrediblygone November 15 2008, 16:46:25 UTC
Thank you. :D I've always imagined Dougie to be all quiet and enigmatic, for some reason.

And the change of tenses is purely intentional, I assure you.

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