there's a safety issue

Nov 26, 2009 01:10

;between planets and sweethearts
;One-shot
;Gen, with slight Ohno Satoshi/Ninomiya Kazunari
;Nino was here
;PG
;Starts as crack and ends as something else.
;One cookie to Johnny Kitagawa.

Nino disappears on a Saturday morning. )

fandom: arashi, p: ohno satoshi/ninomiya kazunari

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a_mbry0 November 25 2009, 18:31:51 UTC
The reasons, lol I laughed so hard! XDDD
But where's Nino!? He just suddenly disappeared D:

Ah this is awesome again, thank you! ♥

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incrediblygone December 10 2009, 15:52:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Nino's disappearance is meant to be kept ambiguous, so it's up to you to decide where he went. :D

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incrediblygone December 10 2009, 15:54:59 UTC
I-I think. I THINK WE'D BOTH TOTALLY ROCK THE TUX.

And my hopeless fail at any one game has led me to stay away from the likes of Chrono Trigger, so level 20 to me is pretty impressive, yo.

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flange5 November 25 2009, 18:43:59 UTC
I really loved this! The crack, the way the other members take Sho's outburst and make it into their own tradition and way of coping instead of a mistake or a stigma, something to be brushed over in the way that Nino's absence can't be--it was really well done!

My heart actually leapt a little with the "Nino was here," so the letdown when Aiba gets caught out was that much worse. The way you leave it unanswered--did something happen to Nino, did he just leave with no explanation--I love that you leave that open, even though I really want to know what happened . . . and if he ever comes back . . . I appreciate the withholding of narrative closure . . . but I want to know.

I'll shut up now, but this was awesome. And I couldn't help chortling at how appropriate your username was for this fic ^_^

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incrediblygone December 10 2009, 16:02:11 UTC
Aww, thank you! Their way of coping here was a lot easier to write, as compared to what they're perhaps really do in real life if such a thing were to happen. D:

Explaining what really happened to Nino would most likely open up too many other questions, and perhaps ground the fic in reality much more than I would've liked it to be, so I'm really glad you liked it this way. :D

And I didn't even notice the link with my username. o.o Haha. Your brain is awesome.

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rio_sora November 25 2009, 19:34:44 UTC
where is nino?
he should at least tell anybody,
the sho part is funny,
i love this,
thanks!
^^

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incrediblygone December 10 2009, 16:05:29 UTC
I have no idea where he went, so he can be wherever you want him to be. :D

Hee. Sho cracking always leads to the perverse pleasure of us fangirls. Thank you for reading!

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blufox_o7 November 25 2009, 20:36:46 UTC
I can't seem to get over the "awwww" phrase. I've been mouthing it waaaaaay too much while reading this.

Sequel, yes? ♥

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incrediblygone December 10 2009, 16:06:49 UTC


I know you just want to see Aiba doing lap dance demonstrations for the otters.

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