oh I could hold you for a million years

[incrediblygone]

;what they really mean when they type on seafoam green Underwoods
;Matsumoto Jun/Ninomiya Kazunari
;“It’s like I have gunpowder in my veins and fireworks under my eyelids,” Nino says.
;PG
;Absolute fiction.
;Cross-posted to arashirabu;This was written as an experiment to see if I was capable of writing something other than Ohmiya. The experiment result? 失敗.

Comments

[eggchan]

I didn't think it was a 失敗! I really enjoyed this, and reading a first person perspective Arashi fic is a really nice change for once ^^

[incrediblygone]

Aww, thank you! I'm kind of terrible at writing first person POV, so I'm glad it came out alright for you.

:Db

[pebblegosling]

I thought this was great- Like everyone said, the last line was a real killer- Well done!
Thank you for sharing!

[incrediblygone]

:D I'm happy you liked it!

Thank you for reading.

[g_esquared]

1. ;n; ANGSTY MATSUMIYA.
2. YOU WROTE IT IN FIRST PERSON. ALSKFJL. AND MADE IT SOUND SO NATURAL, HOW. ALFKHDFJLDSAKF. orz orz orz
3. He’s lying on his back now, only because he’s afraid that I’ll suffocate him with the said pillows if he burns a hole through them with the joint, and he won’t live to see twenty-six. Tough. - Jun/Nino defining line if I've ever seen one.
4. I loved this - Nino’s not gay so much as he just doesn’t give a flying fuck about gender boundaries - and the whole paragraph it was in.
5. STILL NOT AWKWARD. I reach out, pull our skeletons close. Oh shit that's so beautiful. we’re both raw and open and sinking into each other’s bones - not the prettiest thing, but they're not meant to be.
6. Last line. Way to be gorgeous, bb, and to make it hurt.
7. ♥♥♥
8. DO NOT SAY 失败。
9. Slightly irrelevant fact: my first Arashi fic was Jun/Nino and it's now privated (/o\). This is complex and a little bit cold and intimate in very different ways and THERE IS NO APPARENT NEED TO HIDE IT FROM THE WORLD.

[incrediblygone]

1. ;n; The first non-Ohmiya pairing I thought of was Bitchy/Bitchier.
2. BECAUSE JUN WAS HIGH. It is merely a reflection of how weird-ass my normal thought processes are.
3. Tough love FTW, bb.
4. Yeah well, I love you.
5. THE AWKWARD IS OUT THERE. But I'm glad you like that one line.
6. Thank you, you.
7. ♥♥♥♥
8. /o\
9. WHUT. But g_esquared fic must be shared with the world! :O

You leave the loveliest comments.

[barefootprint]

this is beautiful! it's complex in it's own way, and their relationship is kinda like that too.

i like the last line! awesome way to end it.

thanks for sharing! =3

[incrediblygone]

Yes, I've always thought Jun/Nino's the most complex of the lot. Because, well, they're not exactly very liberal with their ghei lovin' towards each other, but there's still something there, you know?

Thank you for reading, bb!

[calerine]

你一点也没有失败啦！你把这篇写得好漂亮哦！♥

[incrediblygone]

谢谢. *loves on you*

♥