Yes, yes you probably are. I enjoy the way you write, but hate that you killed them off. Really, I'll just read it again now to ensure I understood all the nuances the first time through. Then, I may have to read it again tomorrow to check that your use of syntax was correct. That's why. Not because it was achingly good...no, not that at all.
Oh oh oh. Not as heartbreaking as it should be, I fear, with the premise. Light, because yes, Greg would be the type to just saunter up like death was hardly an inconvenience, and yes, they are the type who wouldn't let something like a mortal coil stop them. I was broken in the best way by the image of Nick trapped in the box, calling for Greg, while Greg cries helplessly from ground-level.
Ah! You made the really cool Nick/Greg subtext icon !!(why do I know this? Because I spent ages trying to find who I had to credit :P) I've been behaving so erratically lately *twitch* having only been into CSI quite recently, my fan girl gene went crazy trying to catch up EVERYTHING up till recently x.X;; so yea, I wasn't being weird and stalking you at all ¬¬;;;
...Well you know, if Nick was my (and God, I wish one of them existed for me in real life) I wouldn't let Death get in my way either XD
lol, well, I'm glad you liked it. And, hee, feel free to stalk! It's flattering. I've actually been working on some icons lately, another post is imminent. I really should be working on fic, too...
That was deep! It didn't go too far into the story, but it was enough that the rest was just subtext. I've seen people go so far in that half-way through the story you're bored out of your mind. It was short and sweet! That's how a good story is made. And I can see Greg pounding on the ground, begging Nick to come back to him. In stories like this, as hard as it seems, the only thing you can do it kill them both. It just doesn't seem fair that one of them's dead and one's alive. And while I would prefer both of them alive. When unfourtunate events occur like that, the perfect ending has to be them together again. And until someone finds a cure for death, killing them both is the only way
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LOL, I'm glad you liked it. *happy* I remember watching Grave Danger and (not on New Year's Eve though) and thinkign it's SO damn good, I'm always so scared for Nick in that episode. I remember, it really annoyed me that Greg didn't half as much screen time to angst as I would've liked though. But, trust me, everytime I did see him on screen I was interpreting all his looks as a mixture of love/greif/worry :P
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...Well you know, if Nick was my (and God, I wish one of them existed for me in real life) I wouldn't let Death get in my way either XD
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*whimper*
That was angsty and beautiful, but also so sad :(
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...God, I'm so glad the two of them are alive.
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