dead leaves and the dirty ground

[indelible_x]

title: dead leaves and the dirty ground
pairing: minho/key
author: bingi (indelible-x)
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: OH YEAH, ME AND SHINEE? YEAH, WE'RE TIGHT. HOLD UP, LEMME CALL 'EM ON MY CELLULAR DEVICE. (i own nothing.)

Comments

[nhiphuong]

Key starts to wonder if Minho will stick around for the holidays, but he already knows that he'll be gone the second it starts to get cold again.

It's hard to stay warm if no one's moving.

I love the last sentence, ppl only realize how much they need e.o when they're not tgt...

But please Minho, u cant leave Key again ><

I love this story~ Esp the part Key plays with Jonghyun's name. HAHAHA JOHNNY? JAMES? JIM?? You must be kidding!!! that's sooooo LOL-worthy xDDDDDDDDD

[indelible_x]

ahhh, i know the feeling.
hopefully he'll stay. NOBODY KNOWS.

pahahahah, i'm glad you liked it! those parts were the funnest to write. ;DD making fun of jjong = number one hobby. but i love him.
thanks for reading, bbycakes. you're the best. <3333333

[nedy90]

love this piece so much..
and i'll make sure minho stays with key.. hehe

and poor jjong. key, u r so cruel cute

[indelible_x]

thank you for saying so.
LOL please do! Minho doesn't know how good he's got it. ;DD

pahahha, thanks for reading and commenting, bbycakes. I appreciate it. :33

[e_nicola]

Key starts to wonder if Minho will stick around for the holidays, but he already knows that he'll be gone the second it starts to get cold again.

It's hard to stay warm if no one's moving.

ughh minho why?? *punch his face*

i like this story. thank u ~♥

[indelible_x]

omg ikr
but noooo no punching. HE'S CONFUSED. :cccc

but thanks for saying so. I'm glad you liked it!
thanks for taking the time to comment~~~

[limmet]

I just found this fic and I usually don't read minkey, but let me just say that I absolutely adored this one. It was marvelous,hilarious , I loved it, especially when Key got Jonghyun's name wrong, hehehe.
And the love story between Minho and Kibum was so pure and soft it touched my frozen heart <3
It was beautiful.

[indelible_x]

bawww, minkey is great. join usssss.
LOL thank you so much for taking the time to read anyway omg you're the best ;~;
PAHAAHA. i'm glad you liked the funny parts. those were the funnest to write. ;DDD

you're too nice to me bbycakes. thanks again for reading. :3

[salome620]

“It’s just that sometimes,” He shifted, licking his lips and staring up at the ceiling in the dark before continuing. “Sometimes after a long day, I’ll walk into the apartment I’m staying in, or the hotel room or whatever, and I’ll say as I open the door ‘babe, I’m home.’” He pauses again, staring down at his own hands, folded neatly over his stomach. “And then I’ll remember you’re not there. You’re here. After that, every place seems too empty.”   - aw...  this really got to my fluffy heart.

this is so lovely.  i love how beautifully you painted their awkward relationship.  i was confused by the push-pull inertia between them, but at the same time, i was fascinated by it.  it's so obvious how they love each other very much but Kibum has protected himself so securely inside his wall.  i'm glad that Minho is persistently trying to breakdown that wall.  ow...  made me so giddy.  (*long sigh*)  i hope things work out for the best between them.

[indelible_x]

d'awww bbycakes. thank you so much for reading! and for seeing the fluffy side to this ahhh you're so sweet. yeah, their relationship is a little confusing... and i really didn't give much background info about it lol oops my bad. but thank you for reading anyway and saying such nice things. <333