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Blind Date

Feb 07, 2009 02:53

“That’s it!” Nick exclaimed.

This is Nick for you, forever pompous. Sometimes I wonder whether it is sane of me to seek advice from him. But he’s a close enough buddy and after a few drags together, he actually gets me talking. Considering how he always manages to get swarmed by gals and his life is bereft of any emotional drama - well almost, ( Read more... )

chinky guy, fiction, blind date, chinky girls, short story, girlffriend

Comments 8

pritygirl February 7 2009, 10:34:52 UTC

i liked it :)
me clicking on a cut before reading all my friends entries, is very rare. did that just now =)

pun_princess February 7 2009, 12:15:12 UTC

awww thanks !!!
BTW, I adored monica too :)

vyastejas February 7 2009, 19:28:20 UTC

Devoured it. Munched it wildly. Enjoyed it.

PS: The "drag" was nicely humanized :)

pun_princess February 7 2009, 20:12:59 UTC

Thank You :)for reading all through!

This story needs some serious editing now that I re-read it...

missinsomnia February 13 2009, 04:43:40 UTC

nice concept - agree with pun princess in that you need to edit the story - make it a lil sharper!

pun_princess February 13 2009, 09:36:18 UTC

thanks! BTW, pun(k) princess is the author of this story :P

missinsomnia February 13 2009, 11:34:55 UTC

hahahhaaa

sorry for my ignorance :P

pun_princess February 13 2009, 12:40:30 UTC

No issues babe :)
Infact I'd appreciate if you can point out the unnecessary details which mar the story. Only a true critic can bring the best outta a writer na...