Comments | india_writing: Sweet Surprise

tshreyu in india_writing

Apr 01, 2009 01:15

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Some constructive criticism? flospring April 20 2009, 16:14:16 UTC

Hey,

Perhaps your title gives a bit too much away?

Flo. :-)

Re: Some constructive criticism? tshreyu April 21 2009, 10:38:29 UTC

yeah, maybe. Its too late to change it now, though. I hope you enjoyed the story, anyway.