FINE LINES

Jun 23, 2009 22:45

 Lines and Rivulets of fate,
Etched into my skin,
Question marks and hazy paths
Simmering within
You stare at me
You're etched in stone
And you tell me I'm alone
There's no way to turn back time
What will be will be,
And so I smile and wait a while,
Que Sera Sera doesnt work for me
And you, fine lines shall see.
For fingerprints wont lead my way
And that is why ( Read more... )

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sepiaverse June 23 2009, 18:44:19 UTC
beautiful!

i read it like a song, playing a immature tune in my head along, and it sounded quite nice still :)

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scarlet_19 June 24 2009, 16:10:56 UTC
Thank you. Greatly appreciated :)

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scarlet_19 June 27 2009, 11:45:55 UTC
Thanks for the advice, but you're right- it was done on purpose. I got tired of all my poems being so...structured. Freehand is a new thing for me, so I'm just experimenting. :)

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