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indienewt

What Happened Next

Sep 13, 2006 01:18

The last thing I told you about Jack was that he was on his way home. As he crossed the brook a bleached white object caught his attention. Squatting down, he brought the deer skull into his lap. His fingers ran along the fissure that divided it into two halves until they dipped into two mirrored holes located between the eye sockets. They felt ( Read more... )

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anonymous September 13 2006, 18:32:30 UTC

symbol=!cymbal ----> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cymbal

A common mistake for non-band kids.

feuerdorn September 13 2006, 20:55:58 UTC

It's so creepy when anonymous people write things and don't say who they are.

twoeyedgirl September 14 2006, 21:05:59 UTC

Ew. Yeah it is. WHO ARE YOU, PERSON????

ps. Chapter 3 is in the works, right?
And Evan. Oh man. You've done it again.

that was me pseudoutney September 15 2006, 16:08:10 UTC

you can all stop freaking out now

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AFTER What happened next pseudoutney September 13 2006, 18:53:18 UTC

The teacher, Mr. Tool, was writing the last of his two paragraph condemnation of Mr. Trite's essay when he heard the wailing of ambulance sirens. Followed by police sirens. Followed by firetrucks. "What the fuh..." he realized that they were headed to the outskirts of town. It had begun again. They were back. The Old Ones had returned. Mr. Tool hastened to his closet and flipped a hidden switch, revealing a secret compartment containing various containers of liquids and powers, an old black robe, and what would appear to be a bible. It was not a bible. It was the Necronomicon, the unholiest of unholy books, bound in human flesh and inked in the blood of the innocent, witness to innumerable sacrifices. "CTHULU FLAGON!" Tool exalted at the top of his lungs. Today was going to be the day to end days and he was to be first witness to the destructive glory that was set to consume all inhabitants of Gaia. Just then, there was a knock on the door. It was Jack and Kidd, a couple of guys, who were up to no good, who had started makin' trouble ( ... )

Re: AFTER What happened next nuerotica September 14 2006, 15:41:31 UTC

Why do all Evan stories end like that? I think that the true writer should start including you in his stories as Pvan Dutney, a young blasphemous lad who has the grave misfortune of being hit by a bus every segment. Mmmm sounds like good literature to me....

Re: AFTER What happened next pseudoutney September 14 2006, 16:09:56 UTC

James why are you such a spoil-sport and a whiny bitch?

Re: AFTER What happened next indienewt September 14 2006, 21:35:30 UTC

CALL ON ME
CALL ME!

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