[bsg fic] Effortless, K/L, R, 1/1

May 18, 2007 00:55

Title: Effortless
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Rating: R
Words: 3,253
Spoilers: through S3 finale
Summary: I have no faith left, Kara, except in you.
Disclaimer: These characters are just as fictional as Kara and Lee. If only they were mine.

Birthday fic for my dear wisteria_! Many bionic hugs to you, hon. It's a little slapdash, but I hope it's at least partly ( Read more... )

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canadiangirl_86 May 19 2007, 18:46:57 UTC
This was absolutely fabulous! The perfect balance of schmoopiness and angst. Just wonderful. I love your different take on their reunion, that Lee's not completely certain as to who/what she is but doesn't even care. Seeing her try to convince him was utterly heartbreaking.

I love that she didn't want him to wake up alone. And that they're handcuffed to each other! Oh, pilots!

Thanks so much for this great story.

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indigo419 May 21 2007, 15:01:05 UTC
oh, such a lovely comment! I feel like it would take Lee a while to decide what she is, but he might feel it was all right to let desire come before duty this once. And I do love giving pilots a bit of schmoop. :0)

thank you!

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gespawcho May 19 2007, 22:54:30 UTC
Wow. You write some seriously beautiful imagery.

I love the idea of them getting a second chance on an unsettle planet. And the visual of Kara standing in the tall, green grass waiting for him to jump down is fantastic.

And I loved the ending. So well done.

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indigo419 May 21 2007, 15:44:44 UTC
thank you! Pilots are so rarely alone, I thought it would be interesting to see where they might go without any any distractions. So glad it pleased!

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tree May 20 2007, 00:53:55 UTC
wonderful, wonderful! such a lovely complement to wisteria_'s fic. and the part where he tells her he doesn't care if she's a cylon. oh!

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indigo419 May 21 2007, 15:49:48 UTC
Oh, Lee! He's overdue for some lovin', dontcha think? ;0)

thanks so much!

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fadingphantom May 20 2007, 13:22:18 UTC
omg he HANCUFFED THEM TOGETHER!!!
clever boy - I love it, that was perfect! :D

xo

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indigo419 May 21 2007, 15:53:12 UTC
I'm not sure but I think it was a little bit of improv on Lee's part. ;0P

thanks so much, glad it worked for you!!

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latteaddict May 20 2007, 13:37:29 UTC
Sweet and sexy and filled with so many gorgeous little moments between them. I loved the ending. Handcuffing is pure brilliance!

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indigo419 May 21 2007, 16:46:14 UTC
I think Lee's a bit of a romantic - and perhaps just a tad kinky! ;0P thanks, Latte - glad you enjoyed!!

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latteaddict May 22 2007, 01:01:19 UTC
I think Lee's a bit of a romantic

absolutely!!

and perhaps just a tad kinky!

*haha* it's always the quiet ones :P

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