[fic] Five Times She Doesn’t Want Him; or, Psychological Definitions

[indigo419]

Rating: R for implied sexual situations
Pairing: Lee/Kara
Spoilers: Not really speculation for S3: I'm just making stuff up as I go along.
Summary: But she’s Starbuck, it would never do to let him see remorse, and anyway she thinks she can make him smile in ten seconds.
Disclaimer: Just playing in RDM's 'verse.
A/N: For

Comments

[jandjsalmon]

Really perfect. I giggled as I envisioned her smiling to herself about his weight gain.

As she slides into sleep she thinks, He got fat, and drifts off thinking of new nicknames for him.

Totally in character. Kara would teas ehim mercilously! ;)

Great work! ;)

[indigo419]

hee! Kara will always be observant and snarky, even when she's broken and battered.

thanks - glad you liked it!! :0)

[greycoupon]

This is so great. As has been said, the structure makes the story. Please write more!

[indigo419]

*g* Thanks - happy it worked for you!! My Muse is temperamental and slow, but I do love writing pilots. =)

[i_am_girlfriday]

So sweet and funny and really just loved it. I love the bit about Kara drifting off to sleep thinking of new "fat Lee" nicknames :)

[indigo419]

*g* thanks!! You know she teases because she loves. :0)

[justabi]

*giggle* I so, so love the ending.

[indigo419]

heh! I'm endlessly curious about how pilots might be if they were to grow old together. Thanks!

[scullymulder123]

I love this...I can't describe it, exactly. It just rocks....and....yeah. It's great. Wonderful, wonderful job.

I love the layout.

Oh, fav line? 'He got fat...and I also loved that she couldn't take her eyes off of him, even though she was engaged to Zak.

Again, wonderful job.

[indigo419]

Yes. Kara is incorrigible, and pilots are magnetic.

thanks, glad it pleased!!