Comments | indigo_fc: The Night Before....

indigo_fc

The Night Before....

Apr 11, 2006 02:36

Keep holding on when
my brain's ticking like a bomb
guess the black bots have come
again to get me
sweet bitter words
unlike nothing I have heard
sing along mocking bird
you don't affect me

( Coming Undone )

Comments 8

cincy0gp April 11 2006, 08:43:45 UTC

At least I didn't get my ass kicked in the story lol :P

cincy0gp April 11 2006, 08:46:37 UTC

Yet another good story. I really wish I could write somedays you Rock Chloe :P

jadedindulgence April 11 2006, 16:54:43 UTC

Beautiful. Bravo.

neberu April 12 2006, 00:40:43 UTC

I like!

indigo_fc April 14 2006, 20:19:27 UTC

Thank you very much!

poisoned_fate April 13 2006, 06:19:23 UTC

Sometimes I wish she was a half-dead. Awesome as ever, hon.

indigo_fc April 13 2006, 06:39:52 UTC

Why do you think she should be a half-dead?

poisoned_fate April 13 2006, 06:42:40 UTC

Well, if I hadn't heard of your Legacy I think she'd be perfect for it.