unwanted bed guests

Apr 11, 2006 11:44

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sniadecki April 11 2006, 16:59:31 UTC
the fire corridor we have created

I like that line.

The picture your new avatar is taken from, that was one of my favorites. Really neat angle.

I'll try for more constructive criticism when I come back around. :)

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indigoelf April 11 2006, 19:17:12 UTC
it wasn't the line that i was reaching for, but the closest i could get to what i wanted to say. i may revise it later on.

i was standing on top of a couple of stair in front of the lighthouse and louis crouched down to take that picture. it came out way cooler than i thought it would.

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manonmaru July 20 2006, 03:08:09 UTC
I agree that the fire corridor image is strong...forget what you were reaching for, you grabbed on to something that worked. Be thankful. We should all be so lucky. The muse is a ghetto bitch on payday. Rollers dangling from her hair and everything. She usually doesn't even bother to change out of her slippers before she reeks havoc at my house.

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