Whirlpool's Betrayal (Majorly a working title) Chapter one

[indigorosebud]

As requested by Andi, here is the first draft of the first chapter of my book. Right now I'm calling it Whirlpool's Betrayal, due to an incident that happened that inspired me to write this thing, and it also relates to an in-universe event that happened before the book started and has next to no effect on the main character. So yeah, I'm going to

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[izunami]

It's really good! You should keep posting it as you go!