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[indubitablydyl]

It's been a month and a half since I last wrote any Fiction.  I suppose that's part of the reasons I miss the depression.  It's so hard to write when there's nothing behind it.

At any rate, there's something behind this one.  A mood, if nothing else.  It's odd, because without intending it, it corresponds rather well with Romance 10.  I can't really

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(I'm so tired, too.)

[warmlonelyrain]

I've missed the fiction. I'd actually been checking recently in your Blogger to make sure you didn't post any and not link here. I didn't really believe that would happen, but I missed it that much that I still checked.

I like how the cursing is and echoes the defilement of the act of fucking.
"dress like you're already gone" was particularly poignant to me.

I usually like your writing, which makes me a usually useless critic.
I think, are there too many quotations?, but, no, I liked those.
Is there too much repetition? No, it has a clear purpose and obvious effect.
I try really hard, I promise.

-Laura the Languid

[moonpuppy]

"It's so hard to write when there's nothing behind it."

True. But you could always write beautiful, "flowing" fiction, following your current mood. But maybe your point is the inspiration isn't there as much with your current mood. And inspiration definitely gets things going, true enough.