Help Pakistan fic: Supernatural Sentinels (1/1) Jensen/Jared, Steve/Chris NC-17

[indusnm]

Title: Supernatural Sentinels

By Indus

Disclaimer: I don't own any Sentinels, Guides, or CW actors. I don't own much at all, but if I did- it probably wouldn't be people. Everyone belongs to themselves, and the Sentinel storyline and characters belong to PetFly.

Pairings: J2, Steve/Chris, one-sided hint of Hodge/Gen

Warnings: Mention of possible slight

Comments

[deej1957]

very well done, as your stuff is :-) TOO SHORT, though.

[indusnm]

Haha, Karraparis bought 3000 words and I gave her more than double that ;) I think this might, might become a verse but I've said that before and then i get bored with things ;)

[indusnm]

And oops, thanks sooo much for your sweet comment!

[2sexyboys]

I really liked that. I would love to see more of it if you are inclined :)

[indusnm]

Thank you for the feedback ;)

I've been in grad school (just graduated) and am doing the ever-hopeless job search thing plus dealing with a family crisis- so it's been a little difficult to get the muse going. Which is basically why I've signed up for a bunch of challenges- I hope to make writing a more regular thing!

[jazzyroses13]

Please don't get bored with this verse I so loved The Sentinel when it was on and this combination is just wonderful. Love Steve/Chris and of course J2 Thank you for sharing

[indusnm]

Thank you! I will definitely try to write more!

[ranua]

That was really good. I liked the way you worked in other people from the CW rpf 'universe'. Especially how you made Aldis Christians guide instead of Steve. Made it more realistic (for an imaginary world lol). It would be pretty cool if you did write more in this universe. Even if you don't though, this is pretty damn good.

One little thing, you've got this Out of the corner of his eye he watched Chris put a hand on Steve’s shoulder and grip it, A couple of paragraphs after this Jared shivered a little as he watched Steve walk out, I think you mean Aldis' shoulder? since you already had Steve walk out.

[indusnm]

Ooh thanks for pointing that out- I need to change that.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

[cmc1964]

Fantastic written story! This deserve to be a verse!!!
Please go on with it! THX for sharing. :-)

[indusnm]

Thank you! Maybe when I have a couple of other fics to get out of the way ;)