[Fic] Four Seasons, chapter 2

[industrialgirl1]

Title: Four Seasons
Chapter: chapter 2, "Summer"
Pairing/Characters: NaruSasuNaru
Warning: not betaed, slight smut
Summary:Life can change in the blink of an eye. Four seasons in four different realities.
Disclaimer: They are certainly not mine even if I want them to be.
A/N: The second chapter of Four Seasons, this time with actual smut (well,

Comments

[istne_pieklo]

Manipulating? Oh noes! I'm innocent! Can't you see my beautiful emerald puppy dog eyes? I'm the embodiment of innocence! Capital i Innocence!
Love the smut, though, kukuku! <3

[industrialgirl1]

You're as innocent as a SasuNaru X-rated doujinshi. And the worst thing is that you corrupted me too! I wanted to give them a bit more fluff before it all goes downhill but you made me give the orgasms. <3

[istne_pieklo]

What's bad about orgasms? They make ppl happy!)))

[industrialgirl1]

Well,generally spoken there's nothing wrong with orgasms just in this particular case I wanted them to have fluff. Maybe a candy flavoured kiss behind the broom shed or something. XDDD

[dayadhvam_triad]

Ha, the beginning sounds like the sun's pounding the earth into itself. Maybe this is an analogy for what's to come...? :P

They lost their shirts? ;) ho hum I wonder

I like the "drunk on sake and life." :DD You've got a knack for pretty phrases. (As you've noticed, when I read things I usually zoom in on pretty phrases I like. ^^;)

A moan rose above the pants filling the air
Under the circumstances, at first I read this as their actual pants (wearing kind of pants) being thrown into the air. Ahahaha. >____>

In that moment thunder finally crashed above them marking the end of the heat and the beginning of autumn.
AND THE BEGINNING OF THE ANGST. >DDDD

[industrialgirl1]

I did not use the world pound! It's too smexy for poor innocent me.XDDD

They were training! Get your mind out of the gutter, you perv. ;-P

Thank you! I love pretty phrases too! :D

...*dies of laughter* Who knows maybe it was?)) You never know what those boys get up to))) But I hope you understood the, uh, DEEPER meaning when you thought about it for a second.

YES! YES! Both autumn and winter will be... Mwuaahahahahhahahahahahahah! They shall suffer!!!!1!!11!

[dayadhvam_triad]

Burning the earth to dust? The sun couldn't be doing that unless it was hitting/pounding/doing something. XDD lol sun/earth porn, y/n? XDDD

I wasn't the one who wrote the smut, you specifically pointed out they lost their shirts! I was merely commenting on the detail. ;)

Of course I got the deeper meaning! Very deep! They get up to very deep stuff, they do. >=9 XDDDD

>D We enjoy the suffering!

[industrialgirl1]

Well, yes the sun was doing something! Burning! XDDD But the sun/earth porn sounds strangely appealing...)))

It's not really smut. It's more like abstract romance with flying pants!

Yes very deep! It takes some effort and lube to enter it but once you're in you'll be ecstatic.XDDD

And I enjoy making you suffer^^

[helike]

hehehe... interesting... :D

Last paragraph - there was on one else. I think you meant "no one" here ;)

(btw... she's trying to convince me to write some ItaNaru smut, too ;) )

[industrialgirl1]

Interesting is good.XDDD

Thanks! Fixed it. Damn typo. That's what you get for not having a beta.^^ But you were the first to notice... Maybe the other two were too distracted by the smut. XDD

(LOL, she's the evil Smut Queen who rules us with a smexy fist)))

[helike]

Not that I would have beta myself :P I'll always miss something I the end ^^; And well... smut is more interesting than misspelled word :P

(The evil Smut Queen just got me... ouch :P)

[industrialgirl1]

I know how you feel)) But getting a beta would just be so... troublesome. ;-P Smut is indeed the thing that hypnotizes the world away from evil mistakes.))

(I already saw. I'm so sorry for your pain. *pat pat*)

[xxstardustx]

oh my!

[xxstardustx]

I love the way summer "heat" is potrayed.
;D

[industrialgirl1]

Hehehe, I actually wanted to make it more fluffy but was convinced otherwise.
Thanks!XDD

[ylmik_wisty]

Oooh, this is pretty. And hot. And pretty. And still very hot-

<3 Look forward to seeing how the other seasons work out for them. ;D

[industrialgirl1]

Thank you! XDDD It was my first time writing anything remotely smutty so it's good to hear it didn't fail completely.^^