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[industrialgirl1]

So, I wrote some more smut. But only because shaitanah asked me to!
Keep talking like that and you'll be obliged to write some smut for me)) is what she said to me and so I went and did what she requested. I'm her very willing SED after all! XDD It's inspired by I'mtoosexyformyshirt!Sasuke from the movie and completelyobsessed!Naruto from canon. Let's just

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[istne_pieklo]

He would have never even imagined seeing the proud and powerful Uchiha Sasuke, avenger extraordinaire, on his knees staining them with the dirt of countless years and the taint of not being the best. mUHAHAHAHAH!!! I had the same idea)) And yes, it's fairly unimaginable, but that makes it all the more HAWT! <3
Then he thought about Orochimaru and his rather unique talent of being able to flick his forehead with his own tongue and decided to never ever ask him about it. Absolutely cracked me up)))
Uzumaki Naruto would not bottom for anyone least of all Uchiha bastard Sasuke. I can see him saying this))) We should give Kishi this idea!)))
If he couldn’t have his heart then he had at least this. AWWW!!! *sobs*
Honey, I'm SO ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THIS!!! And I totally love you!!!!!!!!! @>- YOU'RE MY MOST AWESOME SED!!!!! XDDDD
*drifts off to reread*

[industrialgirl1]

Mwuahahahahaah, the funny thing is that I actually like SasuNaru a tiiiiiiiiiny bit more but Sasuke just fell to his knees and started sucking so I thought "oh, what the hell." XDDD
And I couldn't resist including Oro-chan's tongue in some way. It has totally captivated me in a completely insane kind of fascination. And you know me: I love teh CRACK! XDD
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT!!! And I love you too! And I totally shouldn't tell you that this is longer than all of my other stories except Four Seasons. I seem to be more smutty than I thought. ^^

[istne_pieklo]

I used to prefer SasuNaru over NaruSasu, but then I encountered a mass of really good NaruSasu fics and got influenced)) Now it depends on my mood.
LOL yes, Oro's everywhere! Esp. since he's really hot in the movie, apparently))
I DON'T LIKE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!1111
Tooooold you, you can write smut just as well as other good writers! *cheers*

[industrialgirl1]

Hahaha, I really can't stand either of them being overly submissive because they just AREN'T but in actual sex scenes I still like SasuNaru more.))
I know. O.O I want an icon of pretty!Oro but there's text all over his face.((
THEN I'M EVEN MOAREEEE HAPPY!!!1!
^^Not saying anything about the good author part, but I still couldn't bring myself to write a full lemon. I'm just too shy.XDD

[helike]

And now we all know what really happened in the movie, but what the movie makers never showed us :P

[industrialgirl1]

LOL))) God, I only wish this is what happened. And maybe they did draw this scene but had to cut it out again because some idiot thought it wasn't suitable for kids? XDD

[helike]

well... It WASN'T suitable for kids for sure :P I bet that a certain manga creator forced them to cut it so that he could have it only for himself :P

[industrialgirl1]

*blink* Why ever not? There was no actual intercourse! Mwuahahhahahahahahahahaha)))
Oh god... and now I think I should have included Kishi too and made this a threesome. Thank you so much for that mental image! XDD

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[mykonos2]

I prefer SasuNaru,but the story is hot anyway...although the end is a bit sad...

I don't like sad stories...*sob*

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[industrialgirl1]

Hahahaha, thank you. To be honest I'm more of a SasuNaru girl myself but I don't like it if either of them is totally submissive. I actually think the readers could chose themselves just who would be the bottom in this story. XDD

And the angst at the end... Well, I'm really a angst whore at heart so there's almost always at least one sentence of it in my stories.^^

Thank you so much for reviewing!

[bittkitt]

Wonderful...perfectly characterised (I loved Naruto's logic that Sasuke should bottom seeing as how he was on the ground already), funny, sexy, moving and believable. Happiness...

[industrialgirl1]

Thank you so much! I don't like it if someone portrays the boys as wimpy, feminine bottoms so I'm glad you think they are in character. And really, you flatter me too much.^^

Thank you for commenting! (again)

[bittkitt]

No flattery! I really mean it!

[industrialgirl1]

Thank you so much. You're really nice. :)

[dayadhvam_triad]

Sasuke’s shirt had been lost long ago, even before Naruto had found him here meditating in this cave and really the blond had to wonder just how much the Uchiha loved looking at his own body.
*snorfles* Sasuke, you narcissist! XDD

Then he thought about Orochimaru and his rather unique talent of being able to flick his forehead with his own tongue and decided to never ever ask him about it. Some things were better left unsaid, especially if they were connected to creepy snake-loving paedophiles that wanted his best friend’s body.
>8DD~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ om nom nom. ;) Clearly Sasuke learned his talent from somewhere.

On a more serious note ^^;, I really, really like the ending lines. They have a very wistful, sad sense to them. ;____;

[industrialgirl1]

We all know that Sasuke likes to shake his booty! He's hot and he shows it. :D

I can't get over my obsession with Oro-chan's tongue. I have to include it everywhere! I once had this really crazy idea about Naruto failing a Jutsu and transforming into Oro's tongue, driving him insane because he never stops talking. Then Oro commits suicide by entering the women's part of the Hot Springs and Sasuke comes along, cuts out tongue!Naruto and carries him off into their happily ever after! (please ignore me, I'm insane.) XDDDDDD

Mwuahahahhaha, you know I love making the last lines into this angsty gut punching thing. I'm just not a fluffy person I guess.^^

[dayadhvam_triad]

... WRITE THAT. XDDDD Naruto--transforming into Orochimaru's tongue-- XP So... where exactly is Sasuke's happily ever after? ;)

I'm not a fluffy person either. :P

[industrialgirl1]

Mwuahahahahah, I don't think I will.^^ It's a bit too cracky. not that that stopped me before Sasuke's happily ever after is staying half-naked in a cave and frenching Naruto-the-tongue of course. What did you think? XDDD