[Fic] Four Seasons, chapter 3 of 4

[industrialgirl1]

Title: Four Seasons
Pairing/Characters: SasuNaruSasu, in this chapter only very slight though
Warning: not betaed, angst
summary: Life can change in the blink of an eye. Four seasons in four different realities.
Disclaimer: They are certainly not mine even if I want them to be. The lyrics are by Guster.

A/N: Oh god I hate this chapter. I wrote

Comments

[helike]

T__T Why? Oh why...?! T__T

[industrialgirl1]

Why did I write this?)) Or why did he die? I'm sorry I made you sad. ;__;

[helike]

Why did he die? :/ Oh well... I survive... I've alredy survived Itachi ^^;

[industrialgirl1]

Because I'm evil of course! And because he wanted to. Originally I was going to wait with the character death until the last chapter but... Heheheheeh.)))
Nothing could ever beat Itachi's death in cruelness. :(

[dayadhvam_triad]

he really didn’t feel like going home to confront his father’s blank gaze passing over him like he was nothing but a ghost waiting to disappear.
Oh, Sasuke. No matter what, he almost always gets the short stick of things; either his father doesn't pay much attention, or his family dies and he gets molested by Orochimaru. XDD

He wanted to catch that fire and lock it away from this world to only ever be looked upon by him and no one else. That overwhelming feeling of being alive was wasted on a world that thrived on death and the greyness of a cold heart.
Possessive, Sasuke? :P I like how you contrast Naruto's life with the darkness and death of the Narutoverse.

:O The way you sectioned the announcement of Naruto's death--really, REALLY effective. <3

And they all go into the dark. This is awfully depressing, you know that? XD Sasuke going out of the warm room into the snowy outside. BUT YOU KILLED NARUTO. >(

<333

[industrialgirl1]

I love making the arrogant prick suffer once in a while. But I think he would have preferred getting molested by Oro-chan to this actually. XDD

Yeah, he is.)) I just think that here nothing truly belongs to him. He's an Uchiha but only one of many. And he's a great shinobi but nothing compared to his brother. I think he would want Naruto for himself. :)

Thanks)) I thought quite a bit on how to tell that he's dead but decided that this casual and almost indifferent way would be the best. Sasuke doesn't know he should angst about his death after all.^^

And awww! Thank you! I wanted it to be really depressive! After the fluff and smut of Spring and Summer they needed some well deserved angst. I PROMISE HE'LL LIVE IN WINTER!!! Maybe.

[dayadhvam_triad]

Yeah, true. At least Naruto's alive!

I know! He's counted as one of the many ninjas who happen to be part of the clan; he can't stand out for himself. I suppose he wants those who can make a mark of their own existence on others.

The casual, indifferent way works VERY well. Especially since it's so short and blunt. It's like the emotional impact of the very idea hitting him.

HE'D BETTER LIVE IN WINTER. FOR SURE.

[industrialgirl1]

Yeah, at least he would get some ass then. XDD

YES! That was exactly my idea here. His life kind of sucks in this universe. At least he has a few adventures in canon.^^

Sasuke is such an emotional prick. Originally Naruto wasn't going to die actually. But that didn't really work out.^^;

MWUAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Like I said. Maybe. ;P

[amai_amaya]

Aaaaw, that was sad D: But beautiful as well. *sniffles*

I like how Sasuke and Naruto aren't even on the same team and never even talked to one another but Sasuke still feels as if something's missing <3

[industrialgirl1]

Thank you! :3

This is already the third part and the first two are really fluffy so I needed some angst here. I love my angst! XD

And yes, they are always kind of connected. It's what makes them special. :)

[istne_pieklo]

I'VE LIKE... COME TO HAUNT YOU HERE!!!!1111 BUHAHAHA, TEH STALKER IS DOING IT THE EVIL WAY!!!! NEVER MIND ME, I GOT NO BRAIN ANYMORE!!!
Now that we're through with the preamble, I'll repeat that I love this and add what I forgot to add in Teh FF-sucky-net review: Sasuke's family sucks))))))

[industrialgirl1]

OMFG!!! IS THAT MY FAULT WITH THE DOUBTFIRE LESBIAN PR0N?????? I'M SO SORRY!!! BUT I'M HAPPY TO HAVE YOU HERE!!!
Thanks so much honey. :) You always make me happy with your nice reviews.^^ And yes, Sasuke's family sucks indeed. And not in the good way. ;P

[istne_pieklo]

OH NOES!!!!111 U IZ GIVING OUT TEH DETAILZ OF UR NU AWESUM WIN!!!!!! WHYYYYY!!!!??? SMN WILL WRITE DAT INSTED OF U!!! (Shit, I gotta stop using that dreadful netspeak... But the macros have completely destroyed my non-existant brain! XD)
You're welcome! <3 You and your stories are LOVE! And win of epic proportions, too.
I wouldn't want to ahve a family like that. No matter what Kishi says through Maddy and his revelations, I still believe that is why Itachi killed'em all!)))

[industrialgirl1]

OMFG I'M SO JEALOUS!!! I WANT TO BE ABLE TO SPEAK LIKE THAT TOO!!! AND NO ONE IS INSANE ENOUGH TO SEE MY INSANE IDEAS FROM THAT ONE SENTENCE!!!! (Hehehheh, me likes the new you! <3)
Awww, darling. I think if it wasn't for you I wouldn't post my fics at all.^^
And yeah, me neither. I know that his Dad kind of acknowledged him a bit in canon but that was only because he thought Itachi had failed at being awesome. So, yeah Itachi probably thought: "OMZG!!! THEY ARE ASSHOLES TO MY FOOLISH LITTLE BROTHER!! LET'S KILL THEM!!"))))

[dune_master]

Oh, ouch... that was cruel. ;_; But very well-written. Love your language, it's really vibrant and beautiful. And the atmosphere is perfect. Needless to say, I also love the song you used for the lyrics, so... yeah, love the story! And damn, don't we all love cruelty? XD

[industrialgirl1]

Buahahahhahahahah!!! I live to crush my readers to bits!)) Thank you so much! I'm glad someone likes my attempts at writing. XDD