Lipstick

Jun 24, 2008 19:55

So, I wrote SakuIno. Very abstract SakuIno. I'm actually pretty indifferent to this pairing but. Well. It just wrote itself. And Sasuke and Naruto don't wear lipstick. Unfortunately.Your body is soft beneath my hands. The lipstick you wear stains my lips and my heart. Cherry, strawberry, peach and coffee. Every day your taste is different. I ( Read more... )

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shaitanah June 24 2008, 18:22:40 UTC
I should say I almost never read femmeslash))) But seeing as this was written by you + so abstract + short, I gave it a go. It's really beautiful! The language is so descriptive, and you pain such a beautiful, vivid picture that I couldn't help but reread this over and over a few times))))

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industrialgirl1 June 24 2008, 18:35:37 UTC
You are so nice to me. *blush* And I really don't read femmeslash either. But I got the idea about the lipstick and the boys just don't wear it. I think Sakura and Ino could be interesting together. They are a bit like Sasuke and Naruto in the way they always argue with each other. That doesn't mean I see their relationship in the manga as a romantic one. But you never know! ;-) (Your icon makes me sad :-()

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shaitanah June 24 2008, 18:44:25 UTC
Aww, both of our boys are crying on our icons)))) That's sweet!
I loved that manga panel instantly. It's chapter 405, page 11, when Naruto is angsting about Jiraiya's death at night before Iruka comes to comfort him))) My friend coloured this for me))
Yeah... hmm, don't want to imagine Sasuke and Naruto wearing lipstick. Though Naruto's Sexy no Jutsu chick might))) Or if it's AU and they're in some j-rock band! LOL!
I think the girls might be nice together... I guess I've just already made up my mind that Sakura belongs with Kakashi))))))

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industrialgirl1 June 24 2008, 19:16:12 UTC
SEE. THEY ARE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER!!! Mwuahahahahahaha. Aehm. Yeah. ;-))))))

That chapter is so sad. Both Naruto and Tsunade were so angsty it broke my heart.Kishi seems to like drawing crying people. ^^
j-rock!AU sounds great. Where can I find it? Will you write it? Will SOMEONE write it?! It would be a shame if not...
Sakura and Kakashi is great too. I've read it as a side pairing before and quite liked it. I also like LeeSaku. I'm not really set when it comes to Sakura. She could be the village whore if it makes her happy. As long as she keeps away from Sasuke and Naruto she can have everyone she wants. ;-)

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flawless_beauti June 25 2008, 02:52:36 UTC
That is beautiful, and even though I don't really care for SakuIno I loved how descriptive it was.

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industrialgirl1 June 25 2008, 07:10:57 UTC
I don't read this pairing either. I just seem to write it. ^_^ Thanks for your nice comment!♥

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helike June 25 2008, 09:48:57 UTC
Here we go to another part of what I can do for people on my FList... I never read anything going into yuri, but I did read this one. Beautifully written :) Good job.

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industrialgirl1 June 25 2008, 10:31:16 UTC
That's why I said you're a better person than I'll ever be. You deserve a lot of love and hugs!♥ I don't read any yuri either. But the concept just stuck in my head and lipstick doesn't work for boys. Thanks for your comment!

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amelia_seyroon June 26 2008, 07:03:22 UTC
I've strayed a bit far from the SakuIno pair and moved on to other couples.

*waves the SakuHina flag*

But I LOVE this story so much! It's so gorgeous!

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industrialgirl1 June 26 2008, 14:43:25 UTC
Then I'm sorry for seducing you back to the dark side! XD

Thanks!

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amelia_seyroon June 26 2008, 16:03:49 UTC
XD;

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industrialgirl1 June 26 2008, 21:45:25 UTC
Thanks for your nice comment! Glad it helped in your liking of Naruto ^^

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